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It's Too Early To Write Poetry

High atop maddened peaks await anxious pills to spare coal mine canaries nightmarish sleep: When new moon ascends and threatens weary tides pain ridden stomachs ache ere swallowing pride; From restless valleys come thorns sung muted dreamers whose bright eyed despondence convey majestic thoughts preceding inevitable descents of men labeled insane. Grey avalanche crumbles all preconceived notions of universal truth as bright flashing signs with neon letters reveal God said something but She didn’t mean it. 1/17/2017

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Date: 1/18/2017 2:12:00 AM
I love this poem, it's great when you are allowed to nightmarishly rambles.. Greay avalanche, I like that expression, that's how I often feel in my head. And I love the final line. Good luck in the contest!
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Darren White
Date: 1/18/2017 7:17:00 AM
I am in Europe, it's daytime for me now :)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 1/18/2017 5:57:00 AM
I believe you. Do you never sleep? A rested sheriff is the best sheriff, or so they say
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Darren White
Date: 1/18/2017 3:06:00 AM
You have to clear your head first, and after that it is time for simple Sonnets. Write any silly thing you can think of, just do it. Till your thoughts shook off the clouds. For me it's poetry, and I'll read it all, honestly :)
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Phillip Garcia
Date: 1/18/2017 3:00:00 AM
As usual you're too kind but I certainly appreciate it. I've been in a nonstop mental ramble these last few days and it's become annoying. I just wanna write simple sonnets darn it, not lunatic rants. : (

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