Get Your Premium Membership

Itachi's Immortal

Itachi’s immortal He turned his life into a burning hell For him… He made his little brother hate him To become strong Although he did not do something wrong I can’t explain his love I can’t imagine the pain he has to go through He made contracts, he killed people, He took lives For him, just for him…his little brother Itachi planned it from all along Sasuke thought he was trying to kill him Sasuke lived three years with hatred being his guide Grew strong, but not strong enough to kill him Itachi loved his brother so much, made him hate him For the love that was impossible to last Itachi allowed him to take his life; Not explaining his actions, but following his heart Itachi was a good man, after all I thought he was bad Gave his little brother the powerful Amaterasu To protect him, just for that Sasuke heard the story, knew Itachi’s hell Tears falling from his eyes asking…..Why!!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/13/2010 7:20:00 AM
A great read this morning, thank you for it. Also check out my new poem/narrative: Criminals part 3. Have a great day.
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs