It Would Be All So Great -The Monchielle Style

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~It Would Be All So Great~ (Monchielle) It would be all so great If people were more kind And just show more kindness But world is so very blind There's evil sin blindness It would be all so great If world embrace love peace Was happy, never sad A place of so much joy Showing kid's faces more glad It would be all so great If people show more love Where folks would get along With no more greed, hatred Where anyone would sing song It would be all so great If there was no cancer Hunger, abuse, no more death Where every man loves God With their soul, heart and breath. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2012 May.21.2016 ~Author's Notes: The "Monchielle" is a poetry form or style created by Jim T. Henriksen.

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