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No Such Thing As Just a Little Rape

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For criminal minds contest.

This is fiction for the reader to question . reflecting on possible thoughts about Brock Turner, rape is evil. BTW I wanted the most offensive thing about this write to be how the rapist justifies each of his actions to the point of him even playing the victim card.
It was just a little rape, she wasn’t hurt or bruised or cut, She just had to lie there silently, keeping her slight mouth shut. You see, he was nice, he smiled, and he had spent all his night with her, Bought her drinks, specially spiked, and he waited for the slur. And then, when she passed out, he kindly carried her to his bed, Delicately pulling her pants down, and lifting her top over her head. He knew this was what she wanted, even though she was asleep. He cared, he didn’t do it rough, he didn’t enter her too deep. But a few weeks later, he asked her friends, why they all had cried. That’s when he realized she’d ruined his lust, ruined it with suicide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 6/9/2016 5:04:00 AM
Thank u karam. Its odd but I feel this site has an opportunity to tackle these topics however I feel lonely.
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Date: 6/8/2016 10:54:00 PM
Not finding words to express myself - I've seen many of them already expressed in the comments below. Got to learn to write like that - I share your thinking but fail in the words. Compelling - ah, finally! ~karam~
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Date: 6/7/2016 2:01:00 AM
A powerful statement of how an act like this can change and ruin so many lives. Very well written Lewis about a taboo subject. #7 ; )
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Date: 6/6/2016 8:41:00 PM
Pushing a variety of subjects with your pen, you are fascinating me with every write I read of yours. Your variety and skill is impressive. Touching the subjects that others will not...awesome
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Lewis Raynes
Date: 6/6/2016 9:16:00 PM
Thank you Casarah, I believe poets need to say what others can't. all the time.

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