Get Your Premium Membership

Is This My Sentence

I'm reaching critical will the doctor please save me Do I need to get hysterical before a blessing can re bath me I should be eternally great full and trust me I don't need any confirmation I just need a little blanket to sheild me from all this breaking I fear taking an antidote because those things can make you crazy You cure one major enigma but another one is chasing I want to know about my life but a prophecy is too revealing All I want to know is if these wounds I feel will eventually heal So doctor take your time I'm maxing out all my life lines I will be just fine I know I'm far from the due date line I'm just a young girl whose lost I know this isn't anything new So what's the rush? It's just that these constant blows Can confuse and eventually make a weak girl want to choose

Copyright © | Year Posted 2007




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

A comment has not been posted for this poem. Encourage a poet by being the first to comment.


Book: Reflection on the Important Things