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Involved to Evolve

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Involved to Evolve

"Involved to Evolve" shattered emotions swallowed your heart and invaded my peaceful space another romantic escapade eclipsed and then turned sour deciding to "crash and burn" disrupting family home place wallowing in quicksand as crumbled dreams did cower allowing your foundation to tumble destroying your ivory tower. patience and understanding offered to solve swift conclusions sharing experience of wounds and scars with loving support your "perfect fit" will soon appear evaporating illusions maturity in choice, my son, will clarify portrait distort dark veil of pain will disappear as paper mache' women you abort. *For Cyndi's You Do Understand Contest... *TWO QUINTAINS *Written for my son, Christopher, and his many romantic love affairs which involve us always.

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  1. Date: 3/13/2014 2:09:00 AM
    amazing poem... ~Love you forever my bff....... RIP Sweet Linda-Marie ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:31:00 PM
    Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:23:00 PM
    Oh, do I ever understand this one. I have had my heart broken many times for my children and grandchildren. Congraulations on your win. So worthy. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:52:00 AM
    WON 7th place.. thankxxx...

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 5:34:00 AM
    Congratulations on your 7th place win in Cyndi's 'You Do Understand" contest Linda-Marie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:58:00 PM
    Congratulations on your win. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:51:00 PM
    Hello my bff,, congratulations with your wonderful win in Cyndi's contest... xox~PD

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:30:00 PM
    heartfelt write, Linda-Marie - but he'll meet Miss Right soon: ) Lovely entry for the contest, my friend

  1. Date: 7/24/2012 1:21:00 AM
    My mind went sunder here dear poet with your write. And with good reason dear friend. First, your wonderful way with words, and then, the wonderful view I get of a parent who cares so much for their child, that in poesy the love flares ! And advise......Church, work; the gym ! *smiles*. The strength of the Spirit, the strength of the dollar; the strength of the body! Have a wonderful week Linda-Marie ! Much love to you and yours, james

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 10:19:00 AM
    Hi Linda, hope you do well in the contest. Take care and please be careful, Jancarl

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:34:00 AM
    Lovely poem. Well expressed. Well done. Tfs

  1. Date: 7/23/2012 12:01:00 AM
    Great write for the contest and yes son's seem to involve us in their romantic affairs. BUT on the other hand we look out for our children and they do come to us for advice. NICELY DONE. love phyl

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 7:43:00 PM
    Great advice written in poetic brilliance. All mothers and sons shoiulod heed your advice.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 6:47:00 PM
    i took my mother out for dinner today. she did mmost of the talking but we had a good time. i did not ask her about the messages my girlfriend threaghtened to send. maybe she got them maybe she did'nt. but let me tell you some of these women out here are the devil incarnet. don't read messages from girlfriends.

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 2:32:00 PM
    This was very hard to do..what Dee asked of us I look forward to reading how others took on the task! Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/22/2012 9:29:00 AM
    Nice for contest. I hope you will help he out Cyndi's I wish you the best. Nice reading your work today. Great!!!

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 5:07:00 PM
    I hope he "gets it right" and can be happy. This was a very interesting way to do Cyndi's contest. You are clever to think of it, Linda. Maybe I will try her contest. I am still thinking on Nette's. Well, good luck in her contest and it was nice seeing you today.

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 2:53:00 PM
    Great work for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for your presence at my work..Sara

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 2:09:00 PM
    Wonderfully expressed and done. Loved always bl

  1. Date: 7/21/2012 1:14:00 PM
    This is a treasure of a poem my friend! I really enjoyed this piece of mighty advice! You know love very well Linda-Marie, and all the spoils therein! Great Work!!