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Invitation

INVITATION


Invited was I, by your stunning 
Beauty
To enter the sanctuary of your
Precious being,
Into the sacred chambers of
Your feelings
Where no other male has previously
Been

Rapturous then my heart
Became
As was surrounded with so
Much love
That
My eyes turned towards the
Heavens
For 
To thank my glorious LORD 
Above! 


© Demetrios Trifiatis
06 MAY 2013

Copyright © Demetrios Trifiatis | Year Posted 2013

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Sara Kendrick Date: 5/7/2013 11:41:00 AM I am awe struck with this one..It has such warmth..I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..They inspire me..Sara Login to Reply

Manel Gunatillake Date: 5/7/2013 12:47:00 AM Your heart is filled with enormous love. Nice word collection like of a bee hive. Sweetness pouring out Love manel Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 5/6/2013 1:54:00 PM Very beautiful, Demetrios! Katapliktikos...opos panta! :) Login to Reply

Seosamh De Burca Date: 5/6/2013 12:34:00 PM A wonderful poem my friend, fantastic lines capturing deep emotions of love. A very uplifting poem, well done. Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 5/6/2013 10:45:00 AM the setting provides the lingering mood of serendipity...and perhaps, deep connection with one who is loved.. splendid!..:) huggs! Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 5/6/2013 7:00:00 AM Ah, the sweetness of this write is truly astounding my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! You have painted a harmonious piece, one that I was able to see clearly! What a terrific poem, Great Work!! Login to Reply Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 5/6/2013 9:55:00 AM thank you Russell!