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Invitation

INVITATION Invited was I, by your stunning Beauty To enter the sanctuary of your Precious being, Into the sacred chambers of Your feelings Where no other male has previously Been Rapturous then my heart Became As was surrounded with so Much love That My eyes turned towards the Heavens For To thank my glorious LORD Above! © Demetrios Trifiatis 06 MAY 2013

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2013 11:41:00 AM

I am awe struck with this one..It has such warmth..I enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for your visits..They inspire me..Sara

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/7/2013 12:47:00 AM

Your heart is filled with enormous love. Nice word collection like of a bee hive. Sweetness pouring out Love manel

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/6/2013 1:54:00 PM

Very beautiful, Demetrios! Katapliktikos...opos panta! :)

Seosamh De Burca

Date: 5/6/2013 12:34:00 PM

A wonderful poem my friend, fantastic lines capturing deep emotions of love. A very uplifting poem, well done.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/6/2013 10:45:00 AM

the setting provides the lingering mood of serendipity...and perhaps, deep connection with one who is loved.. splendid!..:) huggs!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/6/2013 7:00:00 AM

Ah, the sweetness of this write is truly astounding my friend! I really loved reading this tremendous poem this morning! You have painted a harmonious piece, one that I was able to see clearly! What a terrific poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/6/2013 9:55:00 AM

thank you Russell!