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Inner Feelings

inner feelings race round my brain not always happy, some causing hurt, tender moments lost in the past resurrected each passing hour. oh how I long for inner peace, so I stop and try to recount the moments...when passion turned to despair. easily drowned in hopes anew can I can't I, which side will the coin fall. this not knowing not even caring in which I lose myself only for these thoughts to raise their head nightly when at my rest. June 22 2016 Judged 27 June 2016

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Date: 6/25/2016 10:11:00 AM
yes, they always seem to haunt us when we are at night trying to sleep. Good one, Seren. Hope you are doing well.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/25/2016 11:52:00 AM
Thank you Andrea, yes your mind sometimes won't click off,thsts the end of sleep
Date: 6/23/2016 2:26:00 PM
Can I can't I....coin fall! A truly introspective write, Seren! Good Luck!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2016 4:47:00 AM
Thank you so much for stopping by....Seren
Date: 6/22/2016 9:16:00 PM
Some deep feelings Seren, good luck in the contest.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 6/24/2016 5:01:00 AM
Hi Tim, thanks for taking time to read my work...Seren

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