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Into the Deep

Loved you deep and the night

Whispering them into your secret places

Meant to tell you sooner but...

And I screamed to GOD my love


Into the deep we plunged and the hunger

Thrashing and skin glistens 

GOD placed his warm hands and love

Faster and rain washing us clean


Waking to you and the sun

The curtain sways and carries us

I have to have you and the breeze

I lean with God to mount with you

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  1. Date: 7/20/2012 10:04:00 PM
    Enjoyed this unique write and so glad you were able to save it. I have lost a few good poems because I didn't save them. Thank you for your comments. God Bless Phyl

  1. Date: 7/14/2012 12:15:00 AM
    very interesting read. very beautiful. unique.

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 9:04:00 PM
    Patrick, this is a wonderful masterpiece. I'm intrigued with the bright and wonderful image you wake to every morning. That line is a whole poem itself. one never knows what is underneath the word real emotions... your poem is excellent... thank you, for stopping by my poem...always PD

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 7:00:00 PM
    Thanks for your kind comments :) I like the style of this poem. Not really the content so much... But it's written well :)

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 3:49:00 PM
    Patrick, I like the flow, ...well done..David

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 12:16:00 PM
    certainly a deep and powerful write, Patrick, thnx for your kind visit..jaggy

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 11:47:00 AM
    great write Patrick

  1. Date: 7/12/2012 10:41:00 AM
    Patrick ...I love the thoughts that you have conveyed in this wonderful piece...enjoyed...Marty

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 11:24:00 PM
    great poetry here mate ..unique

  1. Date: 7/11/2012 7:45:00 PM
    Yes it is beautiful, glad you saved it, thank you for your kind visit onto my poetry, it made my day, v