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Raw moon Lips swoon Rooms locked Shirts dropped Flesh beams Love steams • • Kids cry Hots...bye! ~ Make Me Laugh Contest For Heather Ober 3 July 2013

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Roy Jerden

Date: 7/22/2013 6:16:00 AM

Loved it! Congratulations on your win! Cheers, Roy

Russell Smith

Date: 7/21/2013 4:25:00 PM

Congrats on your fine winning entry

Eileen Manassian

Date: 7/21/2013 6:17:00 AM

Congrats, Nette.....Steamy...I agree with Suzette...those dots leave lots to the imagination! :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 7/21/2013 2:51:00 AM

Nette congrats on win Shadow x smiles

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/21/2013 1:24:00 AM

Nette, yours is outstanding for this contest. Love how you made it based on a theme. BIG congrats.

Karen Anglesey

Date: 7/20/2013 9:09:00 PM

Very cute scenario with vivid imagery. Chuckling out loud at the title, congratulations on your win :)

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/20/2013 8:20:00 PM

Hmmm...Seems I recall you saying you couldn't make the little ditty work?...WRONG!...Congrats - Tim

Skat A

Date: 7/20/2013 8:18:00 PM

Nette, A good one. Congratulations! with the smiles. LUV ~SKAT~

Drjim Martin

Date: 7/20/2013 7:28:00 PM

Nicely done Nette!! Congrats on your win....Jim

Heather Ober

Date: 7/20/2013 7:12:00 PM

Nette, you rocked this! That last footle is priceless! You are just as fabulous at writing humour as you are at writing profoundly descriptive scenes. Big congrats on your win in my contest, my lovely friend! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2013 6:09:00 PM

GOOD ONES!! good and hot.

Matthew Anish

Date: 7/4/2013 5:42:00 PM

Cute poem here! Quite enjoyable read! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/4/2013 11:09:00 AM

Hi! my friend, you have captured the interesting one. Superb imagination. Lovely done. Always, bl

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/4/2013 8:59:00 AM

Good morning Nette

Tim Ryerson

Date: 7/4/2013 8:39:00 AM

More mail, don't fail (to check your mail that is)

Tahera Mannan

Date: 7/3/2013 10:38:00 PM

Haha Loved it. I'm fine luv. How are you. Was real busy with work and travel. Thanks for liking the poem Nette.

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/3/2013 9:00:00 PM

This is a perfect set of Footles her my friend! I really loved reading this delightful poem this evening, such a glorious piece, Great Work!!

Kash Poet

Date: 7/3/2013 8:26:00 PM

Ooh whoo!!Love these footles!I have sent u a soupmail.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/3/2013 2:19:00 PM

Life in a glimpse! Masterpiece!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/3/2013 2:10:00 PM

Been there many years ago..Enjoyed your very expressive and creative work stating how life can be sometimes..Thanks for your visits ..It is good here but very cloudy with the change of some heavy rain..We could use that heavy rain..Sara

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/3/2013 11:21:00 AM

A clever one you are. This made me smile!