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Inner Peace - Lonliness Contest

Why do I always feel alone inside What will it take to fill this hollow place Lonliness eats away your inner pride Only love can fight this hapless trace Helping me to find my inner peace my solace You entered my life this magical day Answering my prayers in a winning way A big smiley face no trace of a frown Filling the emptiness love comes to stay, Happiness pervades no longer alone Form: Dizain. ababb. ccdcd Penned 9 September 2013

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Wayland Bunch

Date: 10/14/2013 4:44:00 PM

Another form for me to try. I like this poem a lot. Great work.

Seren Roberts
Date: 10/30/2013 2:32:00 AM

Hi Wayland. Thanks

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 6:34:00 PM

Thanks for hosting an interesting contest, you had some great entries. Thanks for placing my little poem.

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 8:38:00 PM

My pleasure Richard, glad yours was one I chose ...Seren

David Williams

Date: 9/16/2013 2:29:00 PM

Seren I like the internal rhyme in this little gem, nice to read your work again, if it's for a contest good luck...David xx

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 8:37:00 PM

David lovely to see you. Thank you for your good wishes ...Seren

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/16/2013 12:21:00 PM

so much heart in this splendid piece, seren... thank you for making me part of your contest...:) huggs!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 8:35:00 PM

Nette Hi thanks for your comments ....Seren

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/16/2013 9:09:00 AM

Hi Seren did you mean taken or take? I like the happy ending!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 8:34:00 PM

Thanks Richard, I meant take my fingers cant spell lol...Seren

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/16/2013 12:21:00 AM

If it is for the contest, please give once over for spelling in the third line

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 12:58:00 AM

Thank you i must have read that a dozen times and missed it....Seren

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/15/2013 11:50:00 PM

Excellent. A beautiful write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 12:58:00 AM

Hi Ravi nice to see you again....Seren

Russell Sivey

Date: 9/15/2013 10:13:00 PM

This is simply a gorgeous write, a beautiful write my friend! I truly enjoyed reading this immaculate poem this evening! What a harmonious piece, quite the delightful poem, Great Work!!

Seren Roberts
Date: 9/16/2013 12:59:00 AM

Russell Hi, thanks for comment, u impressed I used a new form for me...Seren