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Infectious - a Collab

You liked me at first with your mind Criss-crossing hugs, our thoughts entwine Infectious charm shattered my sense Droplets hit, crumbling my defense Sparks alarm, ringing intense Followed by drum thumping heart I'm on a new road that seems right Contained by our vows so pure My world lights in brighter hues Contagious, with the love I found in you It was more than my mind that thought You caught my eye, infectious onslaught This meeting of us, never by chance Our defenses drop heading romance Your hand clasp in mine, tango, our dance Chest to chest, they pound a raw debut two Paths in our lives have chosen anew Entertained, now drained we retire On silken sheets,spooned fuse,we perspire Contented, we sleep in naked attire (c) Olive Eloisa and James Fraser 9:35pm September 21, 2014 Sponsor Poet Destroyer A Contest Name A poem you have not entered in a contest # 13 Placed 4th ** thank you Mr. James.. :)

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Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 1/2/2015 3:52:00 AM

Nice one, congrats Olive ...huggs

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 1/2/2015 1:58:00 AM

Congrats on WIN Olive-rajat

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/1/2015 6:54:00 PM

OLIVE, thank you for supporting one of the many, contest I ran last year. Dropping by to say hi in hopes you are enjoying the first day of 2015 :) :) Stop by my latest blog "You Call This Poetry" if you'd like. Enjoy the win, I sure did. Love Linda

Jan Allison

Date: 1/1/2015 6:49:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats Olive and James:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 1/4/2015 6:27:00 AM

thanks much JAn,.. :)!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/25/2014 7:02:00 PM

thank you for the comment on my comment

Justin Bordner

Date: 9/24/2014 8:31:00 PM

Hearts of beautiful balance, passion bridging mind and body, personality and pulse. " Chest to chest they pound a raw debut..." this poem illustrates a beautiful moment of love shared Olive...J.A.B.

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 7:06:00 AM

Thanks much Justine for the generous comments..:) GBU

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/23/2014 8:36:00 PM

SO Nice, and I bet it was awesome working a poem with Mr James... Love Linda

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/25/2014 7:06:00 AM

Yes it is Lollie Linda..:) weeee..:) looking forward to a new poem..:)

Paul Callus

Date: 9/21/2014 3:36:00 PM

Well done to the both of you, Olive_eloi and James! Romantic and some more....paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/23/2014 1:19:00 AM

Thank you Paul..:) GBU

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 9/21/2014 2:51:00 PM

very beautifully penned with such grace

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 7:10:00 PM

:) thanks..:)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/21/2014 10:34:00 AM

Splendid work both of you dear Olive! Love the last stanza the most,, very expressive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/22/2014 7:09:00 PM

Thanks much Dr. Upma..:) I appreciate it..:)

James Fraser

Date: 9/21/2014 9:58:00 AM

Thank you once again Olive for being part of another collab. There are so many topics, subjects to write about and I look forward to writing more with you, James :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 9/21/2014 7:38:00 PM

yes, looking forward too.. :D! thanks much as well.. :D