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Indelible - Haiku 1-10-2017

Haiku 1/10/2017 indelible winds smooth the valley gently cleansing the timber footprints never fade 1/10/2016 submitted to – It’s time for a little haiku – poetry contest

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Date: 1/15/2017 9:17:00 AM
The foot print man made will always show their results to the trained eye..Once man has gone in and cut the timber, how long will it take for the forest to regrow to its state before harvesting of the wood or does it ever regrow to the original state??? Enjoyed reading your work..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 1/15/2017 9:18:00 AM
Vocabulary lesson comes from my learning new words..Sara
Date: 1/10/2017 9:49:00 PM
The imagery was Great john ??. Good luck in the contest. Rainbow.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/12/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 1/10/2017 3:35:00 PM
This is wonderful. So someone is doing a Haiku contest? I gotta go check it out!!
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John Lawless
Date: 1/12/2017 8:23:00 PM
Thanks Andrea....I await yours
Date: 1/10/2017 12:49:00 PM
Great imagery John. Best of luck.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/12/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thanks again Tim for your support
Date: 1/10/2017 12:28:00 PM
Really nicely crafted John. This is beautiful and such a great feeling to your words.
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John Lawless
Date: 1/12/2017 8:22:00 PM
Thanks Chris, we just had a few wickedly windy days so the muse was alerting leaning this way.

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