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Incandescence Blooms

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Below is the poem entitled Incandescence Blooms which was written by poet Andrea Dietrich. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Incandescence Blooms

new lovers - glowing - 
explore each other's bodies

      incandescence blooms

              the moon peeks down through branches
                                    of the oak two lie beneath

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  1. Date: 5/7/2014 1:04:00 AM
    Andrea :). Congrats on an evening visual

  1. Date: 5/3/2014 2:29:00 AM
    A delight to read the poem. Congrats on the win, ANDREA

  1. Date: 5/2/2014 2:05:00 AM
    What a fantastic scenery you paint here... I almost(...) could touch the canvas you painted on.. Congrats on THIS write.. and your HM FAV and rated 7 because of the its impressive beauty.. Dutch congrats ON THE WRITE and WIN. Elly.

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 10:34:00 PM
    Saying much in few is a marvel Andrea n u r so gud at it! congrats on win !

  1. Date: 5/1/2014 7:09:00 PM
    Andrea, this was nice, Congrats & Hugs ------ Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:23:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 11/25/2012 9:39:00 AM
    Haven't got a handle on this one yet glad to see you did SO well. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/15/2012 11:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Su's "Tanka-The Pivot" contest Andrea. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/12/2012 8:00:00 AM
    Congratulations my dear friend, Andrea! love/hugs, LG

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 7:20:00 PM
    Whew!...Love under the old oak tree? VERY nice and I like the interesting layout, spacing, etc....makes it even more compelling...congrats my friend! - Tim

  1. Date: 11/11/2012 10:49:00 AM
    Andrea, congrats in the tanka contest :-) always~ pd

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 2:54:00 PM
    blooming indeed, andrea! a very sensual tanka; I like the unusual line layout you have here, it works very well, congrats! :-)

  1. Date: 11/10/2012 12:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on winning an Honorable Mention in my contest, TANKA - THE PIVOT, Andrea. Great contrast between the heat ("incandescence") of the moment and the cold light ("moon") that had perhaps been witness to another scene. The branches of the oak (a metaphor for life?) must have been denude of folage for the moon to peek through. Memories have the tendency to be evoked when we are placed in a similar situation, not least of these being after a passionate embrace. Love, Su

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 4:48:00 PM
    Yes I am having trouble with soup mail and cannot send it out. Thanks for the heads up that others are having problems as well. Love the imagery in this poem. Leaves lots to imagine ha ha. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/17/2012 4:20:00 PM
    This is outstanding! I love it! I hope I can make one. Good luck and best wishes always my dear friend! hugs:)LG

  1. Date: 10/16/2012 6:48:00 AM
    Interesting work..Winner for sure..I have looked at the contest but I needed to do some research and haven't..Thanks for stopping by..I don't know how I missed this one..Sara

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:14:00 PM
    the title drew me in, the images kept me lovely as i had thought it would be, you handle this form very well!

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 8:35:00 AM
    Great job writing this tanka, Andrea. You know me when it comes to the syllable counts of Japanese forms written in English. Hey, most of my previous tanka posted on the Soup are actually pseudo-tanka(I am practicing off-site and not publicly posting my latest tanka). Lovely imagery in this romanticist tanka. It's good to see that a few soupers are beginning to catch on(even so, one person's thoughts on wot tanka is/isn't, can still be very biased.

  1. Date: 10/15/2012 7:57:00 AM
    nice imagery! best wishes in the contest :)

  1. Date: 10/14/2012 11:57:00 PM
    Suzette should like this one because I like it. Good work as usual Andrea.