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In Trance - Win

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In Trance - Win

I saw her once
At a glance and
In trance I stood.

My heart was light
Walked with light step
But light waned out.

Heard her foot near
Was all ears but
Oh, fear crept in.

Looked at her face
Could not place her
Chased to see her.

Then she was nigh
Heard her sigh still
Felt pry on me.


Date 23-11-13
Dr. Ram Mehta
Form Than bauk
Sixth Place Win
Contest: Any Poem Goes # 15 by Linda

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  1. Date: 4/13/2014 10:50:00 PM
    Dr. Ram, congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 4/10/2014 10:56:00 PM
    I think everyone can relate to this poem. You captured this moment so well here. Congratulations on your win, as well, Dr. Ram!...Thank you for the kind congrats!

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 2:09:00 PM
    What a fabulous win here..congrats Tim

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 10:02:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Dr Ram

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 9:46:00 AM
    A fine win Dr. Ram

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 9:35:00 AM
    Lovely write Dr Ram ! Congrats on great win !

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 5:24:00 AM
    The poet's hypnotic words causing a trance... A respectful salute for a winning poem written by a very good poet........ Dutch Greetings Elly

  1. Date: 4/9/2014 3:43:00 AM
    DR RAM, , Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest...:) LINDA

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    Date: 4/9/2014 9:51:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    :) it was a good one :)
    Mehta Avatar Dr.Ram Mehta
    Date: 4/9/2014 9:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi Linda, thanks for my placement
  1. Date: 11/26/2013 10:59:00 PM
    Beautiful write :) And thank you very much for your comments <3

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 10:12:00 PM
    Hi Dr. Ram, this is a wonderful than-bauk and a beautiful, unforgettable moment! I enjoyed reading it tonight! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 2:02:00 PM reminds me about love at the first sight kind of story. I love the scenery, Dr Ram..Good luck with the contest.. :))

  1. Date: 11/23/2013 4:42:00 AM
    Memorable once-in-a lifetime scene! Thank you for reading me and good luck in this contest.

  1. Date: 11/22/2013 8:23:00 PM
    Hello Dr Ram, this one is mysterious... Reminds me of a song called.. "Don't Stand So Close To ME." ;) good one...Linda