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Thin stilts between earth and heaven bend into a arch of tossed dusk reflecting amiable strains fleeting weeds embrace... fingers of parting sky paint jeweled combs twirled in a bun settling on the nape of windblown curtains; a night arriving bears cupped hands ready to tuck a blanket of rhinestones, much like stars moving from one house to another... and life flashes by as endless travelers floating in azure tour the hours in an imperial journey, rising and falling with the kneads of rocks and moss: throughout the aroma of glazed seasons, flowers close and open the hesitant hearts of men and gargoyles; that always, fire of rainstorm changes to sunlight, black ravens to crickets, spite to nobility—desiring only the music of love’s flight for being, if only to understand the wonder of this world. Earth, Fire, Water, Wind Contest

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  1. Date: 5/11/2013 11:01:00 PM
    This is a masterpiece, especially the end. Many congrats dear friend.

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 6:52:00 PM
    Dreams come true, nette, words are always, your dreams come true. Thanks so much for the entry. Light & Love

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 9:37:00 AM
    How you almost put wings on your words is astounding, Nette.........I am envious of the way each poem sails through the air. This is beauty! Congratulations once again!

  1. Date: 5/11/2013 7:52:00 AM
    Congrats, nette, its grandeur is unique, hugs!! Jag

  1. Date: 5/10/2013 9:28:00 PM
    Loved this nette... especially the last line..congratulations

  1. Date: 5/8/2013 11:19:00 AM
    Best wishes nette... AO

  1. Date: 5/7/2013 12:50:00 AM
    As usual flying high in an abundance of images and delightful, nette, this is awesome !! Jag

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 12:12:00 PM
    Beautiful and with such a strong "nette-voice" in this great lyric my dear Nette.You pull me right into your poem my friend.Winning wishes at the contest:-) Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:55:00 AM
    You cover all your elements here, cleverly distributed in the nature of things to treasure above else the beauty of the soul, I enjoyed your master piece Nette, Blessings in abundance xxx

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:55:00 AM
    An explosion of beauty caused by words' infinite dynamism! Excellent poem! Good luck! Thank you!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 11:34:00 AM
    Oh, how wonderful and pleasing this write truly is my friend! I have a few favorite lines within this illustrious write, "...that always, fire of rainstorm changes, to sunlight, black ravens to crickets, spite..." You have really presented an awe inspiring grandiose poem! You have amazed me with this Earthy, Fiery, Watery, and Windy piece, Great Work with this creative poem!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 10:44:00 AM
    Ah, yes, the power of discovery on the outside...which affects discovery within self. May we all grasp the lesson. Beautifully written!

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 10:40:00 AM
    Yes, essence in last line. Thanks....., loved always, bl

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 10:14:00 AM
    Reads like a winner to me...Great job..Very creative way to go for the contest..Thanks for stopping by..My mouse was wireless and it was in the part that goes into the USB port that was the problem..It had gotten where it was loose and when I would move the computer then the mouse would stop working..I would have to unplug the part that goes in the port and replug it up and sometimes it would work and sometimes not until it was a not working at all..I got a new wireless...Sara

  1. Date: 5/6/2013 9:23:00 AM
    A poem for reflection .... life .... world and human beings. - Very awesome written Nette - I like it and hope it will reach high up on the winning list. - Good luck. - Have a nice day my friend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)