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In the Silence of the Wind

In the silence of the wind To a flowering tree, what does the wind say? I am in love with you; tell me, I will stay. I live like this; what I see is a departure. Being in love with you is pain and torture. I am angry with me, breathing a thunder, What is this pain of love? It makes me wonder. I want to taste the nectar while kissing you. I want to get drunk while I am drinking dew. This is my destiny; always live in pain. Departure is the word for me to complain. I want to stay for a moment to hold you. But I will die as wind, how damn do I do? I am hopeful that one day when as I fly, allow me to kiss you, and then I will die. 12/30/15 Haloo

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Date: 10/10/2016 3:53:00 PM
awesome masnavi there Pashang, TO A WONDERFUL POET, WHAT WILL I SAY? YOUR POEMS ARE GREAT, LET THEM COME IN ARRAYS! best wishes
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Date: 3/26/2016 7:23:00 PM
Beautiful poem Pashang
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/27/2016 3:52:00 AM
Thanks Nayda you are so kind
Date: 2/3/2016 4:17:00 AM
We all are hopeful likewise. Enjoyed the sonnet.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/15/2016 4:47:00 PM
Thank you Probir.. sorry for the delay... this piece is not sonnet, it is Masnavi, the couplet with perfect syllabus and spiritual content.
Date: 2/2/2016 6:23:00 AM
This is another beautiful poem, Pashang. You have a very unique style, your vivid expression of deep thoughts. Very pleasant to read. A7
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 8:47:00 AM
Thank you Daniel, I am a Dragon fly, but my reflection is a butterfly....
Date: 2/2/2016 3:02:00 AM
I've never tried this form but you make it sound that easy, fluid flow and the beat is there, imagery is nice too.. =`)~Olive ELoisa
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 2/2/2016 8:51:00 AM
Thank you Olive.... This form is Masnavi, it is a Rhyming couplet with certain syllabus, but its must be spiritual and deals with "the pain" "Rumi" was the master of this style about a 1000 years ago. Just Google his name, read few of his quotes or poems, then thank me later.... Love
Date: 1/28/2016 8:19:00 AM
Words so gracious. Beauty so outspoken and creativity so explicit. I love this. Thanks for the beyond 7 share.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/28/2016 4:48:00 PM
Thank you very much for reading my story. You're always welcome.
Date: 1/25/2016 10:50:00 PM
wow..what a wonderful piece of work :)) I am delighted...rating...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/26/2016 5:07:00 PM
Thank you my friend
Date: 1/25/2016 1:06:00 PM
Ahh!! I like the poetic quality of this one ..Very creative work..Sara
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/25/2016 6:57:00 PM
Thanks Sara.... I am ready to depart.
Date: 1/25/2016 2:46:00 AM
well written Pashang, great!
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 1/25/2016 6:58:00 PM
Thank you my friend

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