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In the Realm of Luna

Shadows softly creep in the realm of Luna. Twilight gleams; the goddess appears in glory after Sun has sunk into mountains’ valley. Peacefulness gathers. . . . Clouds disperse; the queen’s entourage comes twinkling. All the stars are equal in Luna’s heaven. Even those that fall from the sky are wished on. Dreams light their kingdom. Written 8/29/13 by Andrea Dietrich for the SAPPHIC STANZA Contest of Craig Cornish

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  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:12:00 PM
    Andrea, beautiful image of the rising moon and everyone come to see, very lovely.

  1. Date: 10/7/2013 10:44:00 PM
    Read this one before but did not have time to leave a comment at that time. I loved this write. love phyl

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:45:00 PM
    lovely win Andrea, ........SKAT

  1. Date: 9/29/2013 9:07:00 PM
    Way to go Andrea! Congratulations,

  1. Date: 9/28/2013 9:53:00 AM
    I am never surprised to find you high on the winner's are a true-blue poet, Andrea! Another excellent win....this meter was more difficult for me! (I am no meter-maid) !!! lol

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 7:56:00 PM
    Andrea, Congratulations on your "SAPPHIC STANZA" winning poem.. :) always~~ Linda

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:16:00 PM
    congrats on your win with this beauty Andrea :)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 4:39:00 PM
    congrats on a fine win Andrea

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 3:29:00 AM
    this is gorgeous Andrea....your words flow beautifully....good luck in the contest :)

  1. Date: 9/10/2013 4:31:00 PM
    A very, very beautiful piece of poetry, Andrea! The amazing imagery makes this a very relaxing and enjoyable poem to read...Thank you for commenting kindly on my poem. I really appreciate it!

  1. Date: 9/8/2013 6:06:00 PM
    Beautifully written Petal, makes me want to catch a falling star. Good luck in this contest. Take care, Richard

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 9:49:00 PM
    Beautifully executed Andrea. I have never written in this form. It looks like it might be challenging.

    Dietrich Avatar Andrea Dietrich
    Date: 9/7/2013 10:12:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yes, it IS
  1. Date: 9/6/2013 3:42:00 PM
    A very positive poem. Not seen this form before. So its a good introduction to Sapphic Stanza for me. Shane

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 1:58:00 PM
    love this beauty, Andrea

  1. Date: 9/6/2013 10:16:00 AM
    "The queen's entourage comes twinkling." Great visual line. I have to think of my dad and I out in the back yard looking up at the stars. Like I'm ten years old. Love, daver

  1. Date: 9/4/2013 8:20:00 AM
    Beautiful !! Does this come as easily for you as it seems? I'm sure it are the expert at stress/un-stress !! Craig will love this!

  1. Date: 9/3/2013 12:30:00 PM
    This is very pretty Andrea,,, PS... I thought you were a Star Wars fan... haha..JK.. I was hoping you would enter my latest contest... always..Linda

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 2:41:00 PM
    Ow this seems very difficult to do but You are one of the best here when it comes to challenges and forms.This poem sprinkles serenity..Aw how beautiful for dreams to light the kingdom of luna's heaven..

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 1:24:00 PM
    Wonderful imagery in this poem.Love it!

  1. Date: 9/2/2013 10:03:00 AM
    Good effort Andie! Boy does that meter feel odd on the tongue [or is it just me?] is there any reason Sapphic meter can't be end rhymed? Light & Love