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In the Church At Semilong

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"Worshippers" takes the British English spelling in my poem.

In the church at Semilong no more was heard the priest we had. He had departed long ago to a place some way from here. His voice had timbre like a drum and echoed, certainly, and when he read hymn numbers out, they had air of mystery. "Two six four seven", he would sound, and the "en" echoed all around. The organ started its deep chords and thrilled me with expectancy. In the church at Semilong no more is heard a priest's deep voice... The worshippers were few who came. To close church soon was soon the choice. So now the church is dimly seen, and echoes fruitlessly are sought. In Semilong are other themes, and hidden echoes never caught. ----------------------------------------------- 12/10/2015 Contest - Where Echoes Hide Sponsor - John Lawless 1st place win

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