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In Springtime's Brilliancy

In springtime's brilliancy, I wandered free and leisurely beside a tranquil sea. Birds’ melody - a sweet discovery! A willow tree with leaves all silvery became a canopy to shelter me as happily, I wrote my poetry. for the 'ALL YOURS (Mar 29)' Poetry Contest of Brian Strand

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Date: 1/15/2017 10:10:00 AM
If you seek company, in that sweet tree, choose me, because I'm frolic as can be! Congratulations
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Date: 1/13/2017 11:40:00 PM
Congratulations Andrea. Willows are the best to lie under
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Date: 1/13/2017 9:11:00 PM
Andrea, you are truly prolific! Your poetry is beautiful...
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Date: 1/12/2017 3:35:00 PM
Great place to write poetry Andrea. Might have to settle for a few pot plants and a pond myself - at least when it gets warmer. Congratulations on your win! :-)
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Date: 1/11/2017 3:27:00 AM
Big Smiles. A very tranquil poem, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. :) Hugs, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/10/2017 3:16:00 PM
That is such a lovely image which you project, Andrea! Congratulations on a deserved podium finish. // paul
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Date: 1/9/2017 10:45:00 PM
Mmmm...I envy your silvery canopy. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:33:00 PM
Great write Andrea, congrats on a fine win!
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Date: 1/9/2017 9:15:00 AM
Nice poem with clever rhymes! Good luck in the contest! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:20:00 AM
I like the rhythm and flow of this one..Reads like a rhyming winner..Thanks for all the visits to my page..Sara
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Date: 1/9/2017 2:17:00 AM
So so beautiful... A big 7...
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Date: 1/8/2017 8:11:00 PM
Beautifully done. I love how you vary where the inner rhyme is placed. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/8/2017 2:53:00 PM
I hope this poem wins the contest. Well done.
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Date: 1/8/2017 2:02:00 PM
A tranquil poem Andrea.
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Date: 1/8/2017 8:34:00 AM
I can see this at the top of the list Andrea Such fabulous rhyme and it flows brilliantly!:-) hugs Jan xx7
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