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In-Stilled - Triplet

To ease the damage from love’s withdraw Here’s a remedy I learned from Pa: Use alcohol as your wrecking ball 10/9/11

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Date: 10/14/2011 5:08:00 AM
A cheeky little bit of advice Susan, I'll keep it in mind....cheers Margaret
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Date: 10/11/2011 3:46:00 PM
Is that anything like Distilled? Haha. Some can sure cause wrecks with their drinking. Another clever little poem! Glad you liked my guitar poem. NIce seeing you here too, Susan. Finally I am trying to catch up on my comments!!
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:32:00 AM
A pithy little poem...a gem! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 10/10/2011 7:47:00 AM
Sad that your father or anyone's father set an example like that but it happens everyday..Very creative work..Good luck in the contest..Reads like winners' circle to me..Your presence at my work was uplifting..Sara
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:39:00 PM
LOL.....
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Date: 10/9/2011 1:47:00 PM
ouchy. works real good for the purpose, tho, have noticed. thanks for the write, Susan, beauty day to ya. Namaste~N
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