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In My Cemetery Garden

grow her sweet flowers, so overwhelming, crushing; I drown in the memory, from Mom's own garden; at her stone tomb they flourish, devastatingly lovely. _______________________ May 6, 2014 Poetry/Sedoka/in my cemetery garden Copyright Protected, ID 05-564-686-06 All Rights Reserved, 2014, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, What's In Your Garden, #3 Sponsor, A Poet Destroyer, Judged 05/2014 Second Place

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Date: 5/22/2014 9:20:00 PM
This poem is beautiful heartbreak. Congrats on the win. I will be reading more of you work. TFS :) Jess
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Date: 5/16/2014 7:04:00 AM
Way to go in the garden win..Congrats..Sara...Sad
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Date: 5/15/2014 10:56:00 PM
This is lovely. I would have given it top honors. Hope you are okay, Constance. Love, Joyce
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Date: 5/15/2014 7:57:00 AM
Very moving and impactful imagery! Thank you, Broken! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:37:00 AM
I appreciate so the shorter forms..and adore your sweet piece. Congrats. BG
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Date: 5/15/2014 6:18:00 AM
Congratulations on the well deserved win in the contest, Constance
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Date: 5/15/2014 3:40:00 AM
what a lovely poem and tribute to your mum Connie congrats on win hugs
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:05:00 AM
Congratulations Broken Wings on your big win in PD contest. Verlena
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Date: 5/15/2014 2:02:00 AM
Broken Congratulations, on your winning poem... Thank you for the lovely garden, every poem, was wonderful, and amazing. Take a trip, and enjoy my latest blog "Midnight Garden." If you'd like... Always ~LINDA~
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Date: 5/12/2014 6:43:00 AM
...the last line a sad but it's also inspiring in the sense that the flowers reminds you of life... :) and the lovely imprints your mom has left you.. :), GBU olive.. :) thanks for dropping in my writes.. :)
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Date: 5/11/2014 11:56:00 PM
oh my, that last line again is so poignant too. so sad that your mothers day is without your mother, Constance.
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Date: 5/11/2014 3:46:00 PM
Beautiful Sedoka Broken Wings. Enjoyed my visit... Verlena
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