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In Awhile - At First Glance Contest

I could see him across the studio Talking and smiling, my heart was aglow Hair curling at nape, dimpled smile Please let him notice me in awhile I mixed with the people it was a first day The gallery showing my work today Making sure he wouldn't miss my dimpled smile Please let him notice me in awhile Taking my courage in my hands that was a task Handed him a leaflet, saying any questions please ask Our eyes met, looking away was a trial Please let him notice me in awhile He shook my hand not letting it fall I looked smiling slowly, can I help you at all Can explain my art, said I trying to beguile Please let him really notice me in awhile Maybe dinner tonight I said being bold I make a fantastic pasta dish I am told Would love to he answered with a smile He had noticed me in that short while. Penned 1/7/2014 Contest: At first glance .

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Date: 7/1/2014 3:56:00 AM
I love this Seren..so timid but still bold... How could any man resist.... Hugs Tim
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Date: 7/3/2014 1:26:00 AM
Lol u think so? ....Seren
Date: 7/1/2014 1:24:00 AM
WOW this ticks all the boxes Seren am sure Jared will love it. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/1/2014 2:05:00 AM
Thanks Jan, didn't know whether to be shy or bawdy, lol.....Seren

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