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In a Perfect World - For Contest

In a Perfect World In a perfect world we’d need no God horses hooves would ne’er be shod nor would the instinct to fight or flee determine how you’d relate to me. Each cue ball break would sink your balls there’d be no whispering in the halls if every word uttered is true I wonder what they’d say ‘bout you. When every woman is a perfect ten what would make men look again or cause the woman to entertain hot fleeting glances all the same. And if perchance perfection’s choices damn us all with perfect voices perfect volume, perfect tone a perfect, numbing, endless, drone. Sunrise, sunset, perfect sameness perfection’s sinners, perfect, blameless nothing to venture, nothing to gain ‘cuz everything turns out the same. Everybody shares the wealth dogs pick up after themselves hats in boomeranged retreat returned, and landed, at our feet. Perfection is its own reward no need for heaven or its God angels, idle, listless, dopey wings - participation trophy. 2/8/2016 submitted to – In a Perfect World – Poetry Contest sponsor – Catie Lindsey

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Date: 2/22/2016 7:23:00 AM
Perfection is it's own reward... Bravo!.. Congrats on a great win my friend.. A world I would love to live in.. Hugs... Arlene
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Date: 2/20/2016 2:35:00 AM
thank you for the reply to my comment
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Date: 2/19/2016 9:31:00 AM
Really a perfect world poem.......
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by to comment
Date: 2/19/2016 1:06:00 AM
Awesome poetry n win John.. big congrats!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:13:00 PM
Thanks Dr. Sharma for your continuing support
Date: 2/18/2016 10:19:00 PM
John, Congrats on your "Perfect World WIN." LINDA
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Linda
Date: 2/18/2016 9:16:00 PM
Congrats on the win, John. Each stanza was a gem.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:12:00 PM
Thanks Steve, appreciate the comment.
Date: 2/18/2016 9:13:00 PM
Well done John, congrats on your win!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thanks Edward
Date: 2/18/2016 8:08:00 PM
This one is my favorite. Utopia, a word meaning "no place", but not in a good way, usually. Congratulations!
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:11:00 PM
Thanks for stopping by Roy, always nice to hear from you
Date: 2/18/2016 5:48:00 PM
Well done rhyming verses for the contest, John. Congratulations.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:10:00 PM
Lin, there are those who believe that in a perfect "poetic" world all poem would rhyme
Date: 2/18/2016 5:47:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Enjoyed reading this.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 2/18/2016 5:46:00 PM
John, congrats on your placement in the contest! -luloo *smiles*
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John Lawless
Date: 2/19/2016 12:09:00 PM
Thanks Laura
Date: 2/8/2016 1:32:00 PM
This is an excellent write, John. You are 100% correct. Love it.
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John Lawless
Date: 2/8/2016 3:07:00 PM
Thanks Daniel for stopping by to read and comment.

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