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In A Hotel Room

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In A Hotel Room

In A Hotel Room

In a hotel room, she lies, literally to herself.
Their meetings filled with desire are brief.
How can she put her dignity on a shelf
Lost, between the crumpled sheet.

As a friend I helplessly watch 
As her happiness turns to shame 
All the joy before is lost
Falling for this hoodlums game.

There is no love in a hotel room
Used for trysts and rendezvous
As she leaves she's filled with gloom
Not the girl that I once knew.

Players play for keeps 
no conscience they can sleep.

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  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:58:00 AM
    Many Congratulations on your win Jennifer, sorry i am a bit late xx

  1. Date: 2/20/2013 1:34:00 AM
    Good job! - Your hotel is 7 star! - Congratulations! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 8:38:00 PM
    a very modern sonnet. I quite enjoyed this one. Congrats on a job well done.

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 5:06:00 PM
    A sad tale. congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 2/19/2013 4:15:00 PM
    Jennifer, CONGRATULATIONS :-) ~ love your awesome winning poem in Susan's contest.. take care.. PD