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In a Field of Snow

Duchess, a brown chestnut Tennessee Walker with a long flowing ebony mane, frolicked non-stop along the fenced pasture bordering the corn field. She had the whole eighty acres to herself, kicking up her heels as if she was still a yearling. Fall was nearing its peak and winter was just around the corner; for Duchess, it was just another wonderful season like spring or summer. The dark gray skies indicated a storm was approaching and with the nights changing temperatures, a dusting was evident. Dusk slithered in with the north wind, suddenly- whirling fallen leaves and whipping cold- needle- like rain pierced her huge brown eyes. Duchess bolts – and like the wind, wheels her slender muscular body in a joyous dance. Hoofs thunder intensely on hardened cold soil, uprooting clumps of grass, sending them flying along with her splaying tail. Oxygen saturated nostrils swell as she canters poetically in a field of crystals. The snow now picks up pace as does her slow stride; turning into a gallop. Steam pours from swollen lungs through her soft muzzle, she feels alive but exhausted from the sudden burst. She gazes across the open field and watches the tiny crystals collect on evergreen along the hillside, gradually transforming into puffy white flakes. She knows winter is here. Copyright © 2010 By Caryl S. Muzzey Second Place Winner ~ "Horses or Snowflakes or Horses and Snowflakes” Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance~A Rambling Poet~ Nov. 8, 2010

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Date: 1/2/2016 6:41:00 AM
Worth the read! Great! :)
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/2/2016 1:29:00 PM
I'm glad you enjoyed Hansteven. Would have responded sooner but have terrible internet connection.
Date: 12/29/2015 5:29:00 PM
CARYL, Congratulations on having your poem featured on the soups home page during the last week of 2015 and beginning of 2016 :) awesome way to start the year... Enjoy the coming Year.... SKAT
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/2/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thank you Skat, hope you had a wonderful New Year too. Would have responded sooner but have terrible internet connection.
Date: 12/29/2015 10:07:00 AM
Very well done descriptions here. Immensely enjoyed reading your poetic, flowing story. Happy new year!
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Caryl Muzzey
Date: 1/2/2016 1:25:00 PM
Happy New Year to you too Isaiah, I'm glad you enjoyed my write. Sorry I have replied sooner but I have terrible internet connection, so am unable to get on a lot. Caryl
Date: 11/5/2010 9:43:00 AM
wow, what a wonderful picture of a horse and the coming first snow of winter. Congrats on a fine win. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 11/2/2010 6:02:00 AM
Congrats, I still enjoyed it this time :)
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:38:00 PM
very visual piece, love it, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 10/27/2010 6:53:00 AM
Caryl, I could picture the scene from start to finish. Congratulation's on your win in Constance's contest >> James
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Date: 10/26/2010 3:20:00 PM
Congrats Caryl on your win in Constance's contest with this super entry luv.. enjoy a grand win tonight with luv... excellent write...
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Date: 10/26/2010 2:55:00 PM
I love the amazing story behind your poem, Caryl. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:51:00 PM
What a lovely story from the perspective of Duchess. Congratulaitons. Love, Joyce
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:33:00 PM
Congratulations on this well deserved win, Caryl
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Date: 10/26/2010 12:32:00 PM
Lovely story=telling, Caryl.....one can picture it like watching a movie! Congratulations on your win!! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/15/2010 5:17:00 AM
It was a pleasure to read this narrative today, I really enjoyed it, good luck in the contest
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Date: 10/11/2010 1:38:00 PM
Dear Caryl, As a Ranch Manager I am exposed to all our beautiful Dressage horses each and every day. I love this poem, it is home to me....Beautiful! As Always, Shar
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Date: 10/11/2010 4:50:00 AM
Very nice pen picture of Dutchess, a tennessee walker you have created well worded, Caryl
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Date: 10/10/2010 11:05:00 PM
what a beautiful narrative. All the very best for the contest. Thanks for the comments.
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Date: 10/10/2010 7:20:00 PM
a very well written poem, love the imagery. good luck in the contest! ------Ell
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