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In a Blink of An Eye-Collaboration With Charmaine Chircop

Sitting on the window sill with the wind in my hair I gaze up into the stars, pondering the great unknown. Thinking back of that night, when I heard your first cry tears of joy filled my heart as we carried you home. Nervous and excited, a mother I had just become, you were my angel, my being, my son. You were all that I dreamt of, from my lungs, pure breath. In the cradle I rocked you, before going to bed. With gurgles and babbles you have filled up our lives. With first footsteps, first mouthfuls, with sweet little rhymes With first schooldays, first friendships, first free little moves, Like doing your homework, and tying your own shoes We followed your shadow from a distance not far, giving you your wings, yet knowing where you are The time has passed by, in a blink of an eye, Soon you'll be leaving, making this mother cry.
Co-written by Charmaine Chircop & Tim Smith October 18, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/16/2017 6:48:00 PM
Tim, You and Charmaine a wonderful write in this collaborative piece. I sure can relate to every word... Hugs Eve. ~`*
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Date: 10/20/2014 5:42:00 AM
this touched my heart very deeply beautifully penned you both
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
Hel lo liam,tnls so much
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/20/2014 11:29:00 PM
Thanks liam from both of us...cheers
Date: 10/19/2014 7:00:00 PM
Hey, tim, I know Charma's baby is a girl, so do you have a baby boy that you were thinking of when you did this poem with Charma? This is sweet as can be. Charma must be heaven to work with!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/25/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi. Sweet andrea..Thankyou..big hug
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 7:04:00 PM
I have two boys and one is going off to college soon and eventually off on his own..So the inspiration came from there...Charma was great to write with...hugs Tim
Date: 10/19/2014 2:57:00 PM
Dear Tim and Charma, What joy little ones bring to parents' lives! You do have to let them spread their wings or they will rebel, yet you are still there to catch them if they fall. Such a wonderful description of loving parents. Love, Carolyn
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 7:07:00 PM
Thank you Carolyn..I so do know but I've noticed him growing up so much more this past year...hugs from both of us
Date: 10/19/2014 9:00:00 AM
Great collab, you can't tell who wrote what! a beautiful merge of two beautiful souls!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:32:00 AM
Thanks Cas.....I loved your tribute to breast cancer awareness at your blog page casarah.altervista.org
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:39:00 AM
You are a doll,tnks
Date: 10/19/2014 7:13:00 AM
Two of my favorite people writing an emotional poem that draws at the heart strings, what could be better than that.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Maurice..I'm sure you know how this feels with your two daughters.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:41:00 AM
You are one of my favourite poets too :.),you must know that,tnks so much
Date: 10/19/2014 6:21:00 AM
Wow...the two of you just took this theme and danced with it. Beautiful.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:35:00 AM
Thanks sweetie...hugs Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:43:00 AM
Hi sweet sis...Thanks
Date: 10/19/2014 6:19:00 AM
To see our children head out into the world is a great priveledge an yet it is accompanied with a certain sadness. You both have captured the experience of parenthood with a sincere elegance.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:38:00 AM
Thanks Richard...My oldest has got one foot out the door.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:49:00 AM
Tnks my good friend : )
Date: 10/19/2014 2:55:00 AM
Absolutely stunning - can can relate to every word my friends - this line is simple perfection We followed your shadow from a distance not far, giving you your wings, yet knowing where you are - into 7 and faves - a fantastic collaboration!!!!! Hugs to you both:-) Jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:30:00 AM
Thanks Jan...hugs Tim xxx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:51:00 AM
aaeawaw. thanks sweet Jan..yay
Date: 10/19/2014 2:15:00 AM
So sweet n emotive Tim n Charmaine! Wonderful work done u both great poets!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 9:53:00 AM
Yes Tim is great and so are you : )tmks
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 8:42:00 AM
Thank you Upma from the two of us...hugs
Date: 10/19/2014 12:03:00 AM
Hi dear Tim..Thankyou for being a great friend.It was pure fun,and Im favouring your lines..Awesome you : )
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 8:40:00 AM
Thanks Charma it was my pleasure to write this with you and especially a subject so near and dear to my heart.....hugs Tim
Date: 10/18/2014 11:03:00 PM
There are such tender and heartfelt words written in every line of this poem. Tim, this is a beautiful collaboration from you and Charmaine. Really well done to you both!.... Thank you for your nice comments on my poem. I tried replying to them, but it's not working for some reason. I'm sorry about that!
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Kelly my good friend...hugs Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 12:10:00 AM
Thankyou kelly : )
Date: 10/18/2014 10:40:00 PM
Very nice collaboration from both of you Tim! :) Xxxx D
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:39:00 AM
Thanks Dorian...hugs Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 12:11:00 AM
Thankyou Dorian
Date: 10/18/2014 10:19:00 PM
This is such a nice write of the love a parent for their child :) eve
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:41:00 AM
Thank you Eve....hugs Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 12:12:00 AM
Thankyou Eve :.)
Date: 10/18/2014 9:51:00 PM
Tim and Charmaine, this is a lovely collab. truly loved reading it, well done to you both.....Seren
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:40:00 AM
Thank you Seren....hugs
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 12:13:00 AM
Thankyou sweet Serena : )
Date: 10/18/2014 9:33:00 PM
Tim, You and Charmaine did a wonderful job with this piece in your collaborative effort. Very Well-Done!! The free verse poem flows very well and is a beautiful, very straight-forward read, and a "7" from me. Cheers and Best Wishes, Gary
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/19/2014 11:43:00 AM
Thank you my good friend...cheers Tim
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 10/19/2014 12:15:00 AM
Thanks so so much: )

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