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Imagined Ugliness, the Unseen Enemy

Backlit by the moon she stands, Proud to anyone watching While "I’m too fat,” flawed thoughts Silently stalk her 9/20/11 Received 2nd place in "Doditsu Darkness" contest

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Date: 10/27/2011 11:50:00 AM
I don't follow the contest results, but I hear you got 2nd place with this fine write. Well done indeed! xoxo Robert.
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Date: 9/25/2011 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the contest of Tracie "Dodoitsu Darkness" Susan. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/24/2011 12:09:00 AM
I see you got second place. Awesome, Susan. I had not even seen this one. Were you describing me? haha.
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Date: 9/23/2011 2:20:00 PM
Congrats on your win with this stunning work.Sara
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Date: 9/22/2011 5:05:00 PM
Congrats Susan on super second place win my friend.. awesome poetry luv..
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Date: 9/22/2011 4:32:00 AM
Conmgratulations on the win in the contest of tracie,Susan
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Date: 9/21/2011 12:12:00 AM
"Too fat" is the new norm.
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Date: 9/20/2011 8:36:00 PM
Wow! One of the best I've seen Susan. Best wishes for the contest. Perfect imagery! Love, Annalise
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