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I'M Stupid

I'm a shopping cart, a free form squeaker of the truth. I'm a black top parking lot on the surface of a dream. I'm a thin veneer cross the chest of drawers that hides your dirty magazines. I'm the crust on summer's dusk. The ring around the collar grit. The decay of cowboy comics; A 10 cent glider's path. The harbinger of new math. A washing machine's tumble. The gray skies ominous rumble. A bad haircut on spring break. The Vietnam war, the Superbowl, The lounge singer in the businessman's maw. I'm stupid, a friggin mess, farting and tap dancing the Gettysburg address.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2006




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Date: 11/30/2008 5:03:00 AM
Joe - Congratulations on your poem making Round One of the PSoup poetry contest! Wishing you all the best in the finals and have a Happy Holiday season. Peace always, John
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Date: 11/11/2008 9:03:00 AM
Congrats on making it through to the first round! Good luck in the finals! Love, Shar
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Date: 11/1/2008 6:53:00 PM
Joe - Congrats on your poetry making it through to the next round – Great Job & God Bless
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Date: 10/28/2008 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round. Good luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/31/2008 2:20:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Peace Fathima
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Date: 7/30/2008 4:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Joe. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/28/2008 7:51:00 AM
Congrats Joe, on "I'm Stupid" being featured. A different perspective, original. Vince
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Date: 7/28/2008 6:36:00 AM
Well that certainly was an interesting and well written piece - congrats on being featured this week
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:52:00 AM
Quite an interesting write. Congratulations Joe on being featured this week. Enjoyed this very much. Love, Shar
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