I'M Done!

Just tell me if you’re bored with me Don’t keep me hanging on I’m a big girl now, and know the score I’ll cope when you are gone Just tell me if you don’t like the way I seem to have grown so fond So quick, of you, are you scared Of making such a bond? Just tell me, if you’d rather just stay friends And just go for that weekly beer phone or text once in a while Just pleeese ! just make it clear Just tell me for heavens sake Don’t mess with my emotions Turning hot and cold on me Only confuses all the notions Oh forget it, don’t tell me! I’ll tell you how it is I’m a big girl now, and know the score I’m done with your apathetic idiosis !!!

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Honestly J.T.

Date: 1/15/2013 5:22:00 PM

hmmm, finding someone he really likes probably terrifies him. You caught him off his game. Enjoyed reading, good poem - JH

Miroslaw Eric Sulkowski

Date: 5/29/2012 2:50:00 PM

Very true. Unfortunately :)

Joe Inka

Date: 1/28/2011 4:30:00 PM

I enjoyed reading and somehow the weekly beer line hit home with me. and made the situation relatable for me. Keep hope alive

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/31/2010 1:47:00 PM

Go girl..Life is too short to waste it on one that won't commit..Sara

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 8:37:00 PM

This was great! I loved the last stanza. i wish i had finally said that to my ex wife. It is so hard when we cannot figure out the other persons feelings and what they expect from a relationship or friendship. This was a great write.

Anthony Amero

Date: 4/27/2010 11:51:00 AM

Nice! We all live this mess. Good thing you dealt with it before you got too invested. And thank you so much for your kind words on my writings. I very much appreciate that. I like how this flows, too Tony

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/22/2010 1:22:00 PM

It seems many of us need affirmation, Allie. Fellas that run "hot and cold" can drive us bonkers. Don't understand why some take pleasure in messing with our emotions. If you have the strength to walk away, you're a step ahead of most of us. Good for you! Your message comes through loud and clear. Perhaps if you had shown him this poem, he would have been more consistent. Well done! Love, Carolyn

Michaela Dowdy

Date: 4/22/2010 6:46:00 AM

really great write. this is exactly what im going through. keep up the great writes. *Michaela*

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/22/2010 5:42:00 AM

It sometimes happens in life. But bravo

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/22/2010 4:58:00 AM

Sooner or later we all open our eyes, it is better sooner than later..p.d.

Mike Patrick

Date: 4/22/2010 4:51:00 AM

patience is a virtue...blah blah blah... keep ur chin up...blah blah blah... everything will be ok ;)... <---speech of the century... lol sry... i just dont have much advice when it comes to dating... nvr quite seems to work out the way i see it in my head : /... i know exactly how u feel here tho

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/22/2010 4:34:00 AM

I agree with Daniel--

Daniel Cheeseman

Date: 4/22/2010 4:17:00 AM

Such a sad poem written with true feeling and so well, you deserve better