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I'Ll Be Free

Small cracks of light Gently peeks threw the trees. My souls trapped Trying to fly threw these leaves. Missing the rocket My soul it came to retrieve I’m dropped back Every time I fall flat, But still I try to bounce back. Tried so many times Still can’t seem to fly Think it’s time to give up. Or keep on coming back One day I’ll break threw this trap.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/9/2010 4:36:00 PM
Congradulations on having your poem featured Darshanique, I am pleased to have read this, enjoyed, and best wishes to your upcoming days..P.D.
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Date: 9/7/2010 9:53:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Darshanique. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/30/2010 12:50:00 PM
Well, some days are better than others. Every new step is an accomplishment. Welcome to Poetry Soup and keep writing. Great job! Joseph
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