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If you name a poem something cheesy like--- Venus --- it Will only get twenty reads

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If you name a poem something cheesy like--- Venus --- it Will only get twenty reads

"What's your story?"
she questions,
"you seem interesting."
in eyes
I reply, "NOW."

often people become confused
by such a unique response
not this one

she's a beauty
shiny minded stone
lives warm under veins
lacks definition of alone

alone she stands
tallest green blade
each time the oily blade passes above

she stays the same
tingling pulses exhale her pores
she'd rather sink
than have to think the way of worldly whores

malice skips her
no ripples in the lake
dripping from her face
sunshine slips across tangerine cheeks

gold flows throughout waves 
streaming locks
sky clear eyes surprise those
choosing to be consumed 
by her entice

hands free of envy
no webs to spin
hips unmolested
thighs slick

be warned
she will divide you
no voodoo 
or silly twisted games
though safe may escape you

the girl
baby of zero maybes
she knows

as clarity lent us its giant umbrella 
her lipstick smacked my tongue 
from there
we never looked back

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  1. Date: 1/19/2012 10:46:00 AM
    Wot!? Only 3 comments - don't get all weird on me, but it felt as if I wrote this one while reading it. So many possible ways to interpret this poem(for me anyway). I kept being pulled towards my memories of oil painting while reading this. I agree with Red Fiery below....that is 2 Favs in a row. It amazes me over and over again, wot poems get 40 reads and a comment, and wot poems receive 6000 reads and 400 comments.

  1. Date: 1/8/2012 11:46:00 PM
    my fav poem...this one in my list..i wonder why so less comments...this is very very exquisite wrk lambert..i am entralled ....cheers again!!!!!!!!!!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 9:51:00 AM
    What a beautiful write here JSLambert! You have a description of the woman so erotic it is amazing how real it is! Great poem, I love it! Awesome Work!!

  1. Date: 1/7/2012 8:19:00 AM
    Unique approach to visual beauty, enjoyed your poetry today, love, vie