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If You Could Talk To God: Oh, Dear God,

If I could talk to God, I would ask him if he would take away. All this pain and suffering, That infects this world every day. As my heart it aches with this sickness, of all the sickness in this world which I face. I'd ask dear God, My one true God, Could you please rid the evil, that has taken place. On my knees I beg dear God, this madness that surrounds me is wrong. I fight to make it, In a world where I don't seem to belong. Oh dear God, help this world, What is going on? Why can't the human race open their eyes, and try to get along. My God, I know you placed me here, To better the world and make them see. But I feared that I was incapable, To do the work you asked of me. Dear God, I know you're always right, It's to late to change a world that's in Satan's hands. For all those who had pledge allegiance. To a flag in a country that never understands. Dear God, please help me, Bear the weight of this cross. For I dear God will give my life, to save the wounded and lost. Dear God I will await thee, For when that time arise. I will carry out your will, until the enemies demise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 6/9/2012 3:34:00 PM
Wonderful poem and true as well..Congrats on feature...Patrick
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Date: 6/9/2012 8:47:00 AM
I really enjoyed reading your poem Tina! I know exactly how you feel and I have expressed similar feelings in my poem Mother's Nature so dont feel that you are alone with your ideas!
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Date: 6/6/2012 11:04:00 AM
Nice poem
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Date: 6/4/2012 9:12:00 PM
TINA ,, Congratulation, with your featured poem of the week, have yourself a great night ;-) always ~PD ***
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Date: 5/31/2012 11:04:00 AM
Tina, this and the other poem I read today, tells me clearly that you are very depressed. Please do go and seek some medical help as you don't have to suffer in this way and it is quite a common thing that most people have met along life's way. I have, and so have most people. They're lucky if they haven't.
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Tina Menser
Date: 5/31/2012 3:21:00 PM
Hello, thanks for reading... I'm not depressed, just disgusted by all this Madness and insanity in the World... How do you think God feels about all of this??. To create such beauty, and to see it all go to waste... How disappointing, what a disappointment the human race....
Date: 11/18/2009 2:59:00 AM
Good attempt You are a promising poet. Keep more hopes and keep writing. Good wishes for your new poems. Ravindra
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Date: 11/17/2009 4:20:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tina. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/16/2009 7:12:00 PM
Very nice poem...Enjoyed...Marty
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Tina Menser
Date: 5/31/2012 3:22:00 PM
Thank You :)

Book: Shattered Sighs