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if this is really what you wanted, how about you make it happen

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if this is really what you wanted, how about you make it happen

you've got a mean streak about you, that makes you such a disgrace
you laugh at me and shove me around and hit me in my face
i'm sick of the way you treat me, and how your always knocking down my dreams 
everyone says your perfect for me, but its never what it seems 
because your so messed up, and it took me so long to see 
that you'd end up this way, why would i let this be
i thought you'd change with my love, but i could never make you happy
i did everything for you, but nothing could make you love me 
so here i am lying around the room you locked me in, and trying to hide behind my strength
but its slipping fast, i have nothing left because you've stolen all my faith 
you took the girl i was and the woman i was hoping i could be
but she died down fast when she noticed all the faults you see
and i tried hard to get away from you but you've done nothing but thrown me around
there's no way to get back up and out after you shove me to the ground 
and i would run and hide, try to get away, if it wasn't for the threats 
so ill just lie around wasting my life away because you seem to know me best

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  1. Date: 7/15/2013 9:07:00 PM
    sorry to scare you guys.. or mislead you... this poem isnt about me. it about someone i know who was in a really bad relationship. i was looking at it from inside her point of view and how she must felt

  1. Date: 6/12/2012 10:09:00 PM
    Chelsy, I managed to find the courage and strength to finally say goodbye to someone I thought I could not live without, Fellow soupers have helped me tremulously and we will all help you. Soup mail us anytime. Hugs

  1. Date: 6/4/2012 9:32:00 AM
    Stay strong..there is no need to be intimidated by must follow your heart and accept the change by moving on with your life not looking back. Don't let this ruin your future relationships..enjoyed the intense write here!! I'm always available so you can soup mail me.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 8:34:00 PM
    Nice poem its kinda sad, but this poem will speak to so many women who are in that situation. rated a 7, nice job.

  1. Date: 5/28/2012 11:28:00 AM
    wow guys so sorry... i just proof read this and it isnt so great... so ill be sure to do it now. again im sorry

    gonzales Avatar chelsy gonzales
    Date: 5/28/2012 11:40:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    alright.. all proof read
  1. Date: 5/27/2012 7:58:00 PM
    Chelsy, wow.... hope this is not so... everthing about this poem... is not what i want to read... are you okay??... wow! Girl, you don't have to put up with anyone... who cares what they is about what you want tooo.... now stop, this non-sense... and open a better door for yourself.. you are no ones doormatt... if you ever wat to talk soup mail me... for the mean time,,i know this poem is real and directed to some a-hole.. take care...pd