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If Only I Could Be a Drop...

If only I could be a drop of crystalline water In thousands and thousands of humans I would live I would stay motionless in hearts and hover... An angel moved me in my sleep and took me way beneath the white Earth... I slowly slide through the Happiness Channel in which Love laughingly screams... My terror-stricken heart collides with the desperation of the centuries that pass... written at 12, translated now.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/4/2010 11:22:00 AM

Great write for a young girl..A gift that has stayed with you I see..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

C.C Bloomsfield

Date: 6/27/2010 10:07:00 PM

That happiness channel,what a beauty,a beauty to be that crystalline drop,or maybe you are dear friend,that drop of hope which transmits joy!beautiful write!C

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/26/2010 6:29:00 PM

Such a delightful write,,, the mood in this poem is full of happiness,,,enjoyed...P.D.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/26/2010 5:56:00 PM

The Happiness channel in which Love laughingly screams - yes You have worded the extreme joy one experiences