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if looks could kill

somewhat a surprise
comfort  now my weary eye's
make me forget time

eye's across the room
come into my hungry view
my eye's are feasting

eye's follow their prey
betting their chances what may
devour love one day

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  1. Date: 7/5/2012 7:49:00 PM
    SOme folks around me would not be today.. if they could kill... xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/13/2012 8:41:00 PM
    Happy Valentine's Day John. Enjoyed reading your poem and I am falling behind in my reading,will try and catch up. Hope all is well with you. love phyl

  1. Date: 2/7/2012 2:28:00 AM
    Personally me thougth it twas the poets eyes that were doing the feasting but then I have been known to be wrong! who knows, seems to me the feast might be worth persuing!

  1. Date: 2/5/2012 3:34:00 AM
    These are very well written, enjoyed. harry

  1. Date: 2/2/2012 11:35:00 AM
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  1. Date: 2/2/2012 2:25:00 AM
    hmmm? a very interesting poem. she sounds a bit scary. i would stay away, far away, far,far away. Thanks for your comment on my poem. Jancarl

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 9:44:00 PM
    John,,,, once again... I end my day with your poem.. and if looks could kill... everyone around me would be...ummm.. not gonna finish that sentence.. lol.. glad I hopped on over... have a good night..always..;-)pd

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 6:35:00 PM
    And it will happen. Love the longing in this.

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 3:18:00 PM
    the eyes have it...I saw your comment (someone left his calling card on it) glad my words gave you such pleasure...when is the super bowl? I'll try to be there, but it depends...on circumstances...and if I'm in the souper bowl :-) captcha says 'ment' that means this is meant for you and you alone...

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 2:53:00 PM
    Looks can kill if the looks follow evil thoughts in one's mind..Sad isn't it..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work about "The Walton's"..Is that what men do when they go out and about feasting on unsuspecting women??...Sara

  1. Date: 2/1/2012 12:24:00 PM
    Nothing like a morsel of love to fill the soul enjoyed your poetry today John, if I brought a smile, then I'm glad I wrote a mile, love and light, vie p.s. thank you for all your kind comments.