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If I Wrote My Poem For You

To be sung to the Beatles Tune: "If I Fell In Love With You" https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4yjUuX-I0QE ~ IF I WROTE A POEM FOR YOU ~ If I wrote my poem for you, would you promise not to choose another poet's rhyme? 'Cause you have so much to judge, and to save yourself the drudge by just choosing mine! If I wrote free verse for you I must be sure, from the very first that you will love it more than theirs! If I trust in you......oh please Don't ridicule.. If I edit words...oh please...don't say haiku to me! "Cause I couldn't stand the shame And I...could try again, and change my poem ..to a quatrain! So I hope you know That I ...would struggle hard to change my prose Tho some might cry when they learn what I've proposed But they'd have to bear the pain And I ...will be sad if my new poem is in vain So I hope you know I'll stoop quite low to bribe you Or else, I'll sob and cry, "Oh No! boo hoo!!!" ......If I wrote this poem for you
------------------------------------------------------------------------------ For Beatles Contest Sponsored by John Heck 2010

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Date: 10/17/2015 9:33:00 PM
This is wonderful Carrie! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/15/2015 11:51:00 AM
Carrie, congrats on the win, LINDA
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Date: 10/14/2015 3:19:00 PM
This is an excellent bribe poem/song, Carrie! It appeals a lot to me. Maybe one day you'll write a poem for me:) ~ Congratulations!! // paul
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Date: 10/12/2015 11:25:00 PM
Awesome write n win Carrie! Big congrats!
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Date: 10/12/2015 9:28:00 PM
Super job, Carrie, written to be sung to that tune! Love it! Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:43:00 PM
what a fun write Carrie congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:40:00 PM
WOW, Carrie, mighty clever. If this was my contest, I sure would have placed you high. This is still a wonderful win. Congratulations on your awesome poem. SKAT
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Date: 10/12/2015 2:37:00 PM
This was fun to read, Thanks for entering!
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Date: 2/19/2010 4:03:00 PM
Carrie~ Congratulations on your first place win in John's contest! Laura :0)
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Date: 2/18/2010 9:54:00 AM
Awesome poem for first place win, Carrie. "CONGRATULATIONS" Sincere, Agape, Moses
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Date: 2/16/2010 9:27:00 AM
Congratulations Carrie, You did it very well! Your BEATLEMANIA SING-ALONG poem is among the winners, First place, in the contest Sponsored by: John Heck! I can hear the tune playing and you did at great job with the flow. I can see you must have bribed him...with your good humor! What a fun write this one is. You deserve the win. SMILES… Dane Ann
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Date: 2/16/2010 8:18:00 AM
You should definitely sell copies of this, could be in the Top Ten. I simply love it, you penned an excelent verse. Congratulations on the first place win, well deserved. Caryl
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Date: 2/16/2010 2:46:00 AM
I liked this poem in the melody of "If I Fell". You are so talented on this verse, Carrie. My congratulations on you winning first place. (^_^) Noel.
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Date: 2/13/2010 3:54:00 AM
Super win with a really fun poem! Congratulations Carrie. Glad I didn't miss it. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 2/11/2010 2:57:00 PM
Carrie, many congratulations on your success in John's fine contest >> James
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Date: 2/8/2010 2:08:00 PM
Congratulations, dear Carrie on your splendid win in John's contest! Great job! Peace and love, Audrey
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Date: 2/8/2010 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in John's contest Carrie. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/7/2010 11:30:00 AM
Congrats , Carrie . Well deserved on your most inventive entry ....
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Date: 2/7/2010 12:53:00 AM
Congrats on your success in John's contest Carrie.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments and Kind words.
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Date: 2/6/2010 8:10:00 PM
Oh, Carrie, this is indeed sensational. Well deserved. Congrats on your win. Best wishes, Caroline.
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Brava!
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:30:00 PM
Congratulations, loved this one, ...Margaret
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:44:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your first place win in the Beatlemania contest... kudos to u for a great write.. luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 2/6/2010 12:08:00 PM
LOL You are so awesome!! Well deserved congrats Carrie!!! xoxoxo
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:29:00 AM
not even sure if john seen mine hey dude hmmmmmmmmmmmmmm oh well congrats all
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