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If I Knew You When

If I knew you when… The world would be a perfect place Where laughter like wind chimes Carries upon the winds To sail into forevermore If I knew you when…. This heart had yet to be sung Inspired by effortless love With no maneuverings No plots nor schemes If I knew you when… The world would be a perfect place Where all the mundane would bring joy Where eyes reflect no shades of truth Spoken with a mercurial tongue If I knew you when… The days were as fresh as morning dew Rising to meet the golden sun Dissolving shadows of the night.. If I knew you when… ~*~ 8/21/13 For "Mr. Incredible"

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Date: 12/10/2013 7:20:00 PM
real nice piece.... for real its a struggle for unvarnished truth and we are better for knowing when...
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Date: 9/7/2013 3:52:00 PM
I too just love this...truly awesome poetry.
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Date: 8/30/2013 6:01:00 PM
Really stunning Annalise. This is filled with deep and gentle emotions that can only come from a beautiful soul like you.
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Date: 8/26/2013 9:56:00 AM
love this, my friend. Hope you are well and that Andrea is settling in. Sending you a hug x
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Date: 8/25/2013 6:04:00 AM
Annalise... you are a gentle loving soul! xoxox
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:04:00 PM
Annalise....I love this tender heartfelt write! Hugs
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Date: 8/22/2013 4:58:00 PM
what a beautiful write, my friend x
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Date: 8/22/2013 12:37:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful poem stunning forcast of affection the simple touch of loving the one you love. You my dear friend you are a poet.
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Date: 8/22/2013 8:35:00 AM
Beautifully penned. You have introduced me to a new type of format :)
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Date: 8/22/2013 7:56:00 AM
Absolutely stunning! A gorgeous write my dear Annalise... 10 stars! Big warm cuddly hugs, Jack xoxox
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Date: 8/22/2013 7:29:00 AM
Beautiful Annalise, just lovely.. How are you doing? I am doing good, just cold here in Cape Town.. hugs Wilma
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Date: 8/22/2013 6:31:00 AM
Wonderful words. The last stanza is perfection.
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Date: 8/22/2013 6:27:00 AM
nicely penned Annalise....thanks for stopping by...hugs
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Date: 8/22/2013 5:21:00 AM
- Well written, beautifully Annalise! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2013 11:45:00 PM
Loved it ....Seren
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