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If I knew You When

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If I knew You When

If I knew you when…
The world would be a perfect place
Where laughter like wind chimes
Carries upon the winds
To sail into forevermore

If I knew you when….
This heart had yet to be sung
Inspired by effortless love
With no maneuverings 
No plots nor schemes

If I knew you when…
The world would be a perfect place
Where all the mundane would bring joy
Where eyes reflect no shades of truth
Spoken with a mercurial tongue

If I knew you when…
The days were as fresh as morning dew
Rising to meet the golden sun
Dissolving shadows of the night..
If I knew you when… 

For "Mr. Incredible"

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  1. Date: 12/10/2013 7:20:00 PM
    real nice piece.... for real its a struggle for unvarnished truth and we are better for knowing when...

  1. Date: 9/7/2013 3:52:00 PM
    I too just love this...truly awesome poetry.

  1. Date: 8/30/2013 6:01:00 PM
    Really stunning Annalise. This is filled with deep and gentle emotions that can only come from a beautiful soul like you.

  1. Date: 8/26/2013 9:56:00 AM
    love this, my friend. Hope you are well and that Andrea is settling in. Sending you a hug x

  1. Date: 8/25/2013 6:04:00 AM
    Annalise... you are a gentle loving soul! xoxox

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:04:00 PM
    Annalise....I love this tender heartfelt write! Hugs

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 4:58:00 PM
    what a beautiful write, my friend x

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 12:37:00 PM
    Absolutely beautiful poem stunning forcast of affection the simple touch of loving the one you love. You my dear friend you are a poet.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 8:35:00 AM
    Beautifully penned. You have introduced me to a new type of format :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:56:00 AM
    Absolutely stunning! A gorgeous write my dear Annalise... 10 stars! Big warm cuddly hugs, Jack xoxox

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 7:29:00 AM
    Beautiful Annalise, just lovely.. How are you doing? I am doing good, just cold here in Cape Town.. hugs Wilma

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:31:00 AM
    Wonderful words. The last stanza is perfection.

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 6:27:00 AM
    nicely penned Annalise....thanks for stopping by...hugs

  1. Date: 8/22/2013 5:21:00 AM
    - Well written, beautifully Annalise! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/21/2013 11:45:00 PM
    Loved it ....Seren