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If I were allowed, just one last precious day... Only twenty four hours, to swallow away To fear, or to fret, what a waste of the gift So I'll say, I'll confess, what a blessing it is to be given this choice on how I might spend it. This last gift bestowed, to spend as I please Would I want to be shown, the most spectacular things? What would I do, and how would I choose My mind would be spinning like whirlwinds in spring Would I run away to a tropical sun take a brief holiday, with my hopes on the run? My mind would be topsy, my soul would be turvy and my heart would be yearning for those who I love I have come to conclusion...after pondering, long The choices, though many, aren't hard to resolve I would spend it with loved ones, in the same, simple way With things quite familiar, under the same morning sun Time with my with family, so simple and fun Laughter that rings through a house on a hill, Hamburgers, sizzling, outside on the grill Little ones shouting, teasing, frolicking, Until evening breezes gather us still In the dark on the porch, while my son plays guitar, with a dish of ice cream, while counting the stars Love reaching out with a unspoken sound filling the silence, of a promise untold Watching the sunset...in the hilltops above... How grand is one day.... until the daylight is done.... A perfect days end..... if left with just one..... _________________________________________________ Contest sponsored by Thomas Martin "Days"

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Date: 5/3/2015 9:23:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:28:00 PM
Hey, this is nice. Very well written. I think this is the best of the lot.
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:29:00 PM
So very kind of you to say, Abdul. !! Thank you so much!
Date: 5/3/2015 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie :)
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Date: 8/16/2010 11:01:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Audrey's fine contest. This is most definately my fav, it's a wonderful read >> James
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations! This is a wonderful poem! This sounds like life is going all along in a splendid fashion EVERYDAY!:)
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:24:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. a beautiful write and win for u to enjoy today..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest! And congratulations on you 6th Place Win, Carrie! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:15:00 PM
Family is so important and doing the simple things in life that we enjoy..Great write that should be in the winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for visiting my work and taking time to read and comment...Sara
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:01:00 PM
Loved it Carrie, here i am just stopping by to enjoy your poem very nice, also have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july. Looks nice outside today,..p..d
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:57:00 PM
Loved your free verse Carrie, with its sprinkling of clever rhyme. Despite the subject your poem has such a light feel, in fact it somewhat reminded me of Dr Seuss. You're so right, it would be an honour to be able to choose that perfect last day. Super poem, I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Thanks for all your kind comments ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:52:00 PM
ok I will enter this for another contest not sure which one though ha ha ha ha sarah x thank you so much for your kind words sarah xx
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:13:00 PM
Oh I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT ... sarah x
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