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If I Didnt Think What I Think, Heres What Id Think

IF I DIDN’T THINK WHAT I THINK, HERE’S WHAT I’D THINK In general I think the world is not ideal - It’s full of loser guys who shiftlessly lounge about Drinking beer and smoking and watching women work. If it’s not loafers wearing loafers or gutless beer-guts, Then it’s the state of inequality which is rampant everywhere: Three rich fat cats and a hundred thousand skinny kittens; Three whites managing and a million browns toiling; Three armed thugs in uniform holding back unfree crowds; Is it just me, or can others see this topsy-turvy world? If I didn’t think what I think, here’s what I’d think.. . . That the world is a lovely place exactly the way God intended it; That I should be in church daily, thankful for all the blessings; That I should be glad that it’s them and not me; That my brain is working perfectly and my eyes are seeing; That there is very little which can be done to alter the inequality; That I should shut up and go home and open another suds - . . . But I’d be wrong. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . … . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . Written for, and entered in, Nancy Jones’s Contest “ If I didn't think what I think, here's what I'd think.”

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Date: 2/13/2013 2:16:00 PM
you have a mastery of words and thoughts and the ability to put it on paper. a memory of what sounds good and to mimic that is in your favor.
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Date: 9/14/2012 1:48:00 AM
Your poem makes me so happy not to include my spouse in the beer drinking bunch...he leans toward the workaholic. . . . In a perfect world, there but for the grace etc. Quite some entry for the contest, I am sure will do well.
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Date: 9/7/2012 8:25:00 AM
A side that I didn't think existed. Was once thought ignored rather than ignorant without a care. Glad I read it.
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Date: 9/4/2012 9:51:00 AM
wow Syd....the truth sure ain't pretty and dern it won't even stay cosistant! Light & Love
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Date: 9/3/2012 12:10:00 PM
well done! all the best
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