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Mine Last Hurrah

. Woe is the me if I without supplication inflict mine want Such hern easy lift she is the petite figure of mine last hurrah No petty kiss from this secrete self ‘pon her thankful breast only gasp as her press found hern goal I was smitten by her sudor Like hot oil hern did glaze the me and I without the wavering forgot mine last hurrah

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Date: 2/16/2015 10:34:00 AM
Very nice pen James!I enjoyed your smooth carpe diem piece, my dear friend.A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely day! In his light! God bless you! :) D.
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Date: 2/4/2015 9:10:00 AM
Yes, very cool language weave, James!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:50:00 PM
love that last part and how she made you forget your last hurrah. Sexy one!
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Date: 1/31/2015 9:19:00 AM
This one makes me smile. A very interesting use of language. Thanks for your visit today it means a lot.
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James Peranteau
Date: 1/31/2015 9:38:00 AM
I told you that I was picky with my writes Richard *smiles*...I don't do this often sir, but I had to modify this write. Thank you for this comment though. Blessings to you Richard....james

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