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I Tell Myself I Do It For the Birds - For Contest

I tell myself I do it for the birds. They gather together around flameless fires feeding on warmth’s memory, chattering amid the blowing leaves, feathers puffed against the cold. Their beauty undimmed by the stark dark and light of barrenness their songs no less beautiful in the echoless emptiness, their presence – undiminished. Quietly, I leave a gift, mixed seed to welcome all sustenance to those who share a loneliness in winter, a scarcity of caring the fading heat of flameless fires. I tell myself I do it for the birds. 10/18/2015 submitted to – For the Birds – poetry contest sponsor – Anthony Slausen

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Date: 11/24/2015 3:51:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2015 8:55:00 PM
thanks SKAT, have a wonderful holiday
Date: 11/22/2015 10:54:00 PM
Greetings John. Congrats for your #3 placement in the contest! ;-)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2015 8:55:00 PM
thanks Teddy
Date: 11/22/2015 10:54:00 PM
Congrats on ur wonderful winning work John!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2015 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Dr Sharma
Date: 11/22/2015 5:05:00 PM
Love your poem, John. We feed our birds all winter long and watch them outside our front window. You've expressed my sentiments so well in lovely poem. Congrats on your fine win. Sandra
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2015 8:54:00 PM
thanks Sara, I don't tell the birds about the "turkey" in the fridge...
Date: 11/22/2015 3:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, John! Kind regards, Julia
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John Lawless
Date: 11/24/2015 8:54:00 PM
Thanks Julia, have a great thanksgiving.
Date: 11/22/2015 11:03:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments... the birds have a tremendous struggle, especially in winter... Congrats on your win! Terry
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:19:00 PM
Thanks Terry, I hear the sparrow serenade as the sun warms them in the barren bush.
Date: 10/20/2015 7:20:00 PM
I love to watch the birds outside, and your poem captures your care for them beautifully, John! I think this will soar high in the contest, too :)
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:18:00 PM
Thanks Laura, appreciate your stopping by to read and comment
Date: 10/20/2015 8:52:00 AM
Brilliant poetry! The beauty of the birds in the bleakness of winter, contrasted with the warmth of a caring hand. I absolutely love the title and that you used it as the last line also.
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:17:00 PM
Always nice to hear from you Monterey. There is a bit of a metaphoric license in the poem as the homeless on the streets of Boston in winter seek solace along with the birds.
Date: 10/20/2015 2:40:00 AM
G'day John... through your poem I feel there are birds who will now survive the winter - Lindsay
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:15:00 PM
Thanks Lindsay, I offer what little aid I can and "tell myself I do it for the birds", but the feeling of assisting creatures in surviving the worst of winter always makes me feel a bit warmer inside..
Date: 10/19/2015 11:14:00 AM
Ahhh John, your poem contrasts the harshesness of winter with the beauty of the birds and how they add to bring warmth to winter. This is poetry at its finest!
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:13:00 PM
Thanks Connie for stopping by to read and comment, appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 10/19/2015 9:23:00 AM
VERY nice...A 7 and FAVE. GL in contest, John. Julia, xx
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John Lawless
Date: 11/22/2015 3:12:00 PM
Thanks Julia for the high mark and the FAVE....much appreciated.

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