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I Saw You Walking Back To Me

A million thought and you are not with me Nights,days,wasted in waiting All I wanted in my heart was to love you Years pass by, I still recall your name yet I do wonder, if a time,a moment comes when you will forget me and I would barely remember you Winter follows another Winter in fear in fear that my spirit fails me In fear that my eyelids close before these embered lips ever get a chance to taste frosted manna from your tongue and fresh raindrops from your kiss In the stillness of this place I write to you like I have always done From this little room I count a thousand stars I dream a million dreams For instance,I dream of purple dew falling softly from the veiling of silk sky lacing the emptiness of our arms But stars fade so quick ,and dreams die too soon Stars fade,dreams die Yet I swear,I swear I saw you yesterday I saw you walking back to me I swear,it was your fingertips playing with my hair It was your breath upon my neck's nape It was your smile,your eyes I swear I saw you walking back to me Yet you never did and deep within the furnace of my soul I know you never will.
A fiction poem inspired by a book I read in my teens called ~Wuthering Heights~

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Date: 4/5/2014 2:34:00 PM
Beautiful write Charma!
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Date: 3/14/2014 3:28:00 PM
Bronte country is a few minutes from my home . I haven't been there for a year or two but you took me back with this poem . Daz
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/17/2014 11:49:00 AM
The lake district is truly beautiful as you say Charmaine , Devon is too , The Yorkshire dales are fabulous , Bournemouth , I always thought it was for old people , I had better check it out ,
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/15/2014 2:28:00 AM
I have to go to Gretna Green..I heard about it and the story re couples who are forbid to marry going to that place to marry in the past..Yes ..that s with my top ten next favourites.Few yrs ago We went to lake district,t was beautiful,I even loved Devon's countryside and portsmouth,Had a chance to stay three nights at the isle of wight.We ve been to the midlands too,even to .other sides such as brighton ,were in suffolk and Norwich .The place I visited most was Bournemouth .It has something which keeps calling me there.Every year We talk about going to another country in Europe but it always end up..England Ireland Scotland Wales : )..Strange but true.We just love the language;the people ,the forests mountains lakes and the whole package :.).Yes Gretna Green ..sure wanna go there
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/14/2014 4:53:00 PM
Of course a romantic lady like yourself should head for Gretna Green , That's where couples elope to . The altar is a blacksmiths anvil . You pass through some of the most spectacular scenery in the whole wide world.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/14/2014 4:39:00 PM
Taking Note of this..tnks so much : )
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/14/2014 4:20:00 PM
If you do go to Whitby Charmaine , Please look above the harbour and see the old ruined abbey , Here Bram Stoker wrote of Dracula , You really feel it . A couple of miles up the road is Runswick bay . Take a note book because you'll have a thousand poems whirling about in your mind within minutes.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/14/2014 4:13:00 PM
Chatham i meant oops
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/14/2014 4:12:00 PM
Whitby..yes I heard of Whitby.Every year We travel.to different parts of Uk..We love it.I visited Strstford Upon Avon and visited William Shakespeare's birthplace.etc.Jane Austen's museum in Bath,Oscar Wilde in Irelsnd and in the coming months hoping to visit kent and Charles Dicken's tour in Chathsm.etc..Yes Uk is very rich in poetry.plus its lovely.I'm keeping Whitby in mind.Visited more places in Uk..I love it a lot..Chrers
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Darren Watson
Date: 3/14/2014 3:55:00 PM
very close Charmaine but I spend far more of my time in York , Whitby is my first love though .
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 3/14/2014 3:51:00 PM
So you must live close to Haworth.I was in York and silly me...I didnt ask my husbsnd to travel tp the Bronte's place..It was aboit thtee yrs ago..That s great to live so close.UK is the hub of great poetry..Cheers
Date: 3/14/2014 3:26:00 AM
Poetry is not story or essay or news...Poetry is rhythm of life like heart-beat . Working smoothly without any over react ...I like fiction . I love maximum effects with minimum materials ... Best wishes from India...
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Date: 12/5/2013 12:24:00 AM
Oh my! Very captivating.... Love it, and the new pic by the way. :o)
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Date: 12/3/2013 9:47:00 AM
This is great. Your poetry is always so stunning!...it's easy to get lost in
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Date: 11/22/2013 9:06:00 AM
Emily Bronte would be proud of you. GREAT POEM, CHARMAINE!
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Date: 11/17/2013 10:09:00 PM
Whoa my dearest friend, I loved loved your poem, as me to I read the book, and saw the movie, my God the way you wrote it, feels so real, so amazing and beautiful. Well done. Hi to the princess. Love u Terry
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Date: 11/16/2013 12:29:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poem and its wonderful imagery. Best wishes Linda x
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Date: 11/14/2013 10:36:00 AM
waiting to be charmed again, my dear charms.. how are you?..:) huggs
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Date: 11/13/2013 7:44:00 PM
Lovely poem...i feel those same things sometimes, think the same...imagine the homecoming. ugh, really went straight thru me!!!
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Date: 11/12/2013 10:25:00 PM
Charma, love the poem, and your heartfelt story... longing these deep emotions.... always~ Linda
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Date: 11/12/2013 4:46:00 PM
Hi, sweet Charma. How are you lately? It's not even 4 p.m and yet the sun is quickly sinking and I need to leave the school. Can't wait to see a new post from you! Luv Andrea
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Date: 11/12/2013 12:04:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, Just sending a warm greeting! Ken
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Date: 11/10/2013 7:09:00 PM
Hope and desparation then waking up alone. Life can be so cruel that we see in our minds eye the thing we will nevwr have. A great write Charmaine. Blessings, Carl
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Date: 11/10/2013 8:03:00 AM
Good morning to you Charmaine. I just thought I would stop by to see if you posted anything new. Good job on this poem once more :).
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Date: 11/8/2013 11:13:00 AM
Good morning Charmaine.
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:52:00 AM
........How should I give a beginning to this comment ! I love the way you have expressed your feelings ! Enjoyed this wonderful piece from you ! ....xoxo~Saanvi :p
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Date: 11/8/2013 9:51:00 AM
Wonderful poetry from you Charma.Lovely read.Thanks for visiting my poem page.
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Date: 11/7/2013 7:43:00 AM
Yes indeed Charma! I remember that book well...'before these embered lips ever get to taste frosted manna from your tongue'...Favorite line among many - Tim
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Date: 11/6/2013 4:24:00 PM
seeing this one again. It's so moving, Charma!!
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Date: 11/6/2013 1:08:00 PM
a warm hello, charms!...waiting for your next one with huggs!..:)
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Date: 11/6/2013 10:30:00 AM
Some memorable images,well phrased Charmaine.Thank you for your always welcome comments on my recent structured prose.Rgds Brian
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Date: 11/6/2013 8:32:00 AM
I am glad what you made feel so real is not your reality. Well done Charmaine.
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Date: 11/5/2013 4:47:00 PM
Hi Charmaine, Just stopping by to see if you had a new write..Glad I did as this is gorgeous! Ken
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Date: 11/5/2013 11:02:00 AM
Nice work CC. Wuthering Heights is a classic that shows the drive and determination of a man to be gifted with the hand of life's love. Enjoyed reading this write...TAH
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Gina Young
Date: 11/13/2013 7:48:00 PM
Dang it...I have Wuthering Heights but have not read it yet...must get on that if it evokes these kinds of emotions!!
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