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I remember my lover

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I remember my lover

I REMEMBER my lover         

  HOW  LONELINESS HAD SMUGGLED OUR LIVES

OUR JOURNEY STARTED WITH PURE VERSES

WHEN I SAW THAT LOVE IN YOUR EYES

I REMEMBER MY LOVE. I  do REMEMBER

TODAY MY HEART WRITHES,

THE SORROW OF SEPARATION

WEAKENS MY HEART…

ONE MORE TIME…

 I WISH TO MERGE IN YOUR DREAMS,

DRINK THE WINE OF YOUR LIPS

FEEL THE WARMTH OF YOUR ARMS

RUN  INTO YOUR VEINS

And rest ON YOUR STURDY SHOULDER

 Now TEARS HAVE BARGED INTO MY LIFE

HAPPINESS HAS DESERTED MY WORLD

INSOMNIA HAS blinded my sleep

BUT MY LOVER I YEARN FOR YOU

I SINK INTO YOUR DEEP THOUGHTS

THE RIVERS HAVE BECOME SILENT

BIRDS DON’T  SING ANYMORE

LEAVES HAVE FALLEN disgracefully

THE AROMATIC FLOWERS HAVE VANISHED

FEW DEAD LETTERS ARE STRUGGLING TO BREATH

YOUR VOICE ECHOES

In the valley of my heart.

I remember our unbreakable bond

Time destroys everything.

Oh my lover I remember

How I loved you

With all my heart

I remember my love , I do remember…

 



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  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:55:00 AM
    HEART TOUCHING VERY BEAUTIFUL PIECE OF WRITING

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 6:20:00 AM
    This is truly one of your best! Consider changing your first line to " I remember you my lover" it fits better being you are speaking to him. You should be very proud of this piece. Rated a 7 if I could go higher I would.

  1. Date: 9/20/2013 9:49:00 AM
    When a heart breaks, it is yours. When love is in bloom, it is yours. When sparks become fiery, it is yours. You who blossoms in loves grace become a living metaphor. Aphrodite,is it you? Allan

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    Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    * SMILING*.
  1. Date: 9/19/2013 9:39:00 AM
    - You have a part of his heart .... forget you? No, he never does. - Well written, Red. - Have a nice day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

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    Date: 9/20/2013 10:34:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank u. ANNE
  1. Date: 9/18/2013 9:27:00 PM
    I was the first person to read this :) Your poetry could fill dozens of expensive books.......your mind is like a rare alpine valley brimming with unequaled life.

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    Date: 9/19/2013 1:02:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you wayne...u have always been kind to me :) I am happy to see ur comments...* Hugs*