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I Miss Your Yellow-Anacreontic Verse 2 Contest

I Miss Your Yellow Between orange and green, yellow lights the way. Your rainbow unseen, why couldn't you stay? Inside your aura, streaks a somber glow. Why you left Laura, I may never know. I've seen your yellow. I've felt it's fire. It's hard to swallow, your sweet desire. Sunshine and shade, cheerful yet sad. The mess you made is all I ever had. Memories of you, regret inside me. Your stunning value, you could never see. Perfectly made, and destiny called. You lit the grenade, and left me appalled. Oh, yellow... your soul, why'd you disappear? So out of control, in the atmosphere. Your yellow, my blue, oh, how I miss you.... Anacreontic Verse 2 30 lines and 3-5 syllables in each line Sponsor:Edward Ebbs Date Written: January 13, 2016

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Date: 1/20/2016 12:02:00 PM
ohh, so glowing, laura.. sweet congrats!
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Date: 1/20/2016 5:02:00 AM
How lovely Laura loo.. loved reading today.. congrats on big win.
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:36:00 PM
I felt choked reading your emotional poem LuLoo congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/19/2016 5:42:00 PM
Many thanks Jan :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/19/2016 11:17:00 AM
Lovely and pulls at my heart strings, Laura. You touch colours with a magic wand! ~ Congratulations on this very worthy win. ~~ paul
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Date: 1/19/2016 5:41:00 PM
Thank you Paul :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/19/2016 9:12:00 AM
Congratulations on a fine win in Ed's contest.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/19/2016 5:40:00 PM
Thank you Richard :) Appreciate your stopping by *smiles*
Date: 1/18/2016 10:59:00 PM
Congrats Laura, thank you for entering :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/19/2016 5:39:00 PM
Edward, thank you for my placement in your contest, I really enjoyed this poem :) *Smiles* -luloo
Date: 1/14/2016 10:08:00 PM
Beautiful. CayCay
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/16/2016 2:10:00 PM
Thank you sweet CayCay:)
Date: 1/13/2016 8:17:00 PM
this is one of my favorites I've seen from this form of poetry. REally cool how you incorporated the colors.
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2016 8:09:00 AM
Thank you dear Andrea :) *smiles*
Date: 1/13/2016 6:22:00 PM
well written Laura...
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Lu Loo
Date: 1/14/2016 8:10:00 AM
Once again, many thanks...:) *smiles*

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