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I Went To Heaven

I Have A God Woken up by a mellifluous music never heard before, Made me wonder, was I in the kingdom of Orpheus ? Or was it the orchestra of heavenly maidens? I open'd my eyes after honey'd slumber, Blind'd by sparkling silver and blazing gold Of a goldsmiths treasure trove. I walk'd step by step on the cloudy floor Feeling the weightlessness of my heavy shoulders. Much had I been overwrought by mortal burden, And heaved a sigh at this fanciful world. Above the lands, above the seas, Above the mountains had I obliviously reached. In the realms of dreams I smiled, And swirled my glittery gown. The gods had been kind for this Elysian ecstasy Loud shout'd I my gratitude to the Almighty, If this be divinity I ask for no more Before me stood my creator in all his luminosity and spoke, You call'd me child and I your servant be, No more pain, no more misery, No more desire, no more passion shall ever feel. Your soul in my palm will be, your vesture rested on the ground. Down look you on earth,the towering inferno has turned you to smithereens. Your love is here, And here begin we a life afresh. He point'd his big finger down, once again. There on earth your treasures lie, The fray is on and many will die. For centuries have they fought and for centuries will they continue, Your abode be here for all times to come, Fret not you, for I be here. Spoke I to God, A dream this were not, for I am sure. What treasures do I yearn? What passions do I crave? What pain? What misery you speak of when I your only audience be? My raptures the world knows not of, For too entangled is the diseased world, Of attachments and detachments. Much to their envy am I filled with pride, My journey has not ended, With you by my side it has just newly begun. SECOND Balveen Cheema November 26, 2015 Contest: I went To Heaven Sponsor:Laura Urbaniak

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Date: 12/2/2015 11:53:00 PM
Balveen, Congratulations on your wonderful win. LUV **SKAT**
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/3/2015 6:22:00 AM
Thanks Skat!
Date: 12/2/2015 10:38:00 PM
Wonderful write Balveen ! Congrats on superb win!!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/3/2015 6:23:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 12/2/2015 3:46:00 PM
So beautiful, Balveen. Congratulations on your nice win. 7, Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/2/2015 7:03:00 PM
Thanks Sandra dear!
Date: 12/2/2015 12:39:00 PM
Congratulations on the placement of the contest Balveen.
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Date: 12/2/2015 9:19:00 AM
Thank you for being a part of my contest and contracts your win!-lu *smiles*
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 12/2/2015 7:05:00 PM
Thanks Laura! Travelling through clouds to paradise has its own joy!
Date: 9/28/2015 11:27:00 AM
Hi Balveen. congrads on your win. How amazing it is to me that one of the things that stands out to me in your poem is this: "The relationship that you are developing with God here on this earth continues in heaven when you arrive". It's all so personal! God loves u. Curtis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/28/2015 12:11:00 PM
It is not by chance you wrote me. I was very saddened when you wrote 'God loves u'. Thanks Curtis!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/28/2015 11:50:00 AM
Can't believe someone can do so much of indepth study of my poem. I'm honoured and overwhelmed, Curtis! Regards
Date: 9/16/2015 4:56:00 PM
WoW! Balveen, I'm happy to see you on the winner's list. This piece is well deserving of the 1st place spot. Congratulations on your fantastic win:-) Alexis 7
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/17/2015 2:17:00 AM
Thanks sharing my happiness, Alexis!
Date: 9/16/2015 10:25:00 AM
Thanks Richard, for thinking so! Regards
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Date: 9/16/2015 9:32:00 AM
A well deserved first place. Exceptional!
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Date: 9/16/2015 12:41:00 AM
Superb write n a wonderful win Balveen! Congrats on first place win!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/16/2015 4:26:00 AM
Thanks Upma!
Date: 9/15/2015 7:25:00 PM
I am more than than thrilled for this Honour! Though difficult to believe it was based on a dream I had a year ago, which almost turned into a reality a few months later-but someone I loved more than my heart died. This is my real achievement, Laura!
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Date: 9/15/2015 5:22:00 PM
Thank you for entering my contest, Balveen! I was extremely moved by your poem, thus, a top billing :)
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Date: 9/3/2015 10:45:00 PM
Wonderful deep write dear Balveen, keep your words flowing my dear!
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 9/4/2015 2:40:00 AM
Thanks for your ever ready appreciation, Upma!

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