I Focus My Eyes On Him Each Day- Spanish Huitain

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(Spanish Huitain) Focus my eyes on Him each day He's always with me when in need Jesus is best friend I do say He dwells in my heart and head His words inspires me when read With me whenever I do go He's always there when I'm in need Brings joy when pain in my heart grow. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2014 November,23,2014

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Cherl Dunn

Date: 11/23/2014 10:08:00 PM

Dorian your words of faith have brought a smile to my face and put a warmth of love into this old heart of mine this evening I'm glad I stopped by to read it before I head off to sleep take care my young poet, cheri

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind feedback you just warmed my very heart with it, my dear friend Cheryl. Xxxx D. :) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/23/2014 8:06:00 AM

An admirable show of faith, Dorian. You walk in excellent company! // paul

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:36:00 PM

That sure do Paul! Thank you so kindly for dropping by and all my dear friend.:) love and hugs! xxxx D.

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/23/2014 12:07:00 AM

Wonderful spirit filled write Dorian!

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:38:00 PM

Thank you my good friend Ken! Much appreciate your kind comment! :) Love and light! xxxx D.

Terrell Martin

Date: 11/22/2014 7:20:00 PM

I have to agree with "Gnik" below...it's obvious your faith is far greater than the tiny mustard seed but more like a giant oak tree! Nicely penned poem and I'm certain the Lord is smiling because of it. By the way, what's a "Huitain"? Cheers, Terry

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:41:00 PM

Hope you're right Terrell! Thank you my dear friend for wonderful feedback. Have a great week! :) Love and hugs! xxx D

Nehpets Gnik

Date: 11/22/2014 11:03:00 AM

Very profound indeed. Words that inspire, full of faith. I wish I was a stronger believer like you are. A well written poem.

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 11/23/2014 10:43:00 PM

Thank you my dear friend Nehpets! Most kind of you!:) Love and hugs! xxx D.