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I find myself in a lush forest - dripping wet, steamy and sultry I am one with nature and the swamp water oh, the soft moss and wet lime ferns beneath me water reeds grow, swaying juniper, sage, olive, blue, pine . . . bright green of a little frog and brown of a crocodile small yellow little fish kiss my toes . . . orange snakes slither on the swampy shore a fluttering yellow butterfly, a blue bird sings my eyes stare at the azure sky and I dwell here for the swamp water is my forever home since I drowned . . . _________________________________ September 24, 2016 Poetry/Free Verse/I find myself - Copyright Protected, ID 16-83-171-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Premier Contest, 13 sponsor, A Skat Fifth Place

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Date: 10/5/2016 1:02:00 PM
Interesting poem...
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Date: 10/2/2016 5:25:00 AM
Superb imagery and a fine twist at the end make this a most lovely poem, Constance! Congratulations on your fine win. Regards // paul
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Date: 10/1/2016 10:57:00 PM
Love your haunting, swampy graveyard observations. ;-)
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Date: 10/1/2016 6:26:00 PM
Golly Constance the twist at the end took me by surprise! many congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 10/1/2016 10:41:00 AM
beautiful poem lovely Broken Wings, winning worthy for sure..congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:43:00 AM
That last line really grabbed me! Congrats on your win, Constance! (7 and a favorite) Janice
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:43:00 AM
That last line really grabbed me! Congrats on your win, Constance! (7 and a favorite) Janice
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Date: 10/1/2016 9:14:00 AM
Broken, Congrats on your win. Stop by my blog "in a perfect world" and celebrate with a smile or two. With Hugs **SKAT**
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Date: 9/24/2016 11:36:00 AM
Incredible imagery, Constance! Beautifully written - wasn't expecting that twist at the end. I like this! Blessings!
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