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I Am Not a Robot - Sedoka Contest

I was a machine, Full of valves, pipes and wires, Execute as per programmed, Commands are in sync, To be leased or for hire, To maintain corporate scam, Something sparked within, Burnt with chemical fire, Happenstance of the unplanned, The mind starts to think, My Heart beats to aspire, Awareness starts to ascend, No more a machine, Break down the empire, I am more than just a Man. 12 January 2016

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Date: 1/28/2016 9:33:00 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words. It is always an honour to have my piece read and appreciated. Grateful!
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Date: 1/28/2016 9:15:00 PM
Fariq Yusoff,, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:01:00 PM
Amazing Sedoka poem has landed on this winners’ list. Congrats on your win. Sara
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Date: 1/19/2016 4:09:00 PM
this is REALLY good!!! Congrats on your win. I really liked yours.
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Date: 1/18/2016 11:23:00 AM
Fariq, thank you for being a part of my contest, and congrats on your placement! *smiles* -luloo (soup)
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Date: 1/18/2016 10:50:00 AM
FARIG, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**
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