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I Am Bored With Sex-W

Is there anybody out there anywhere? To help to get rid of this tiring sex? Why the pure love with it we mix ever Is that not adulterous act excess? Alas! The death is attached with the birth, Attached with jealousy is desire's flex. Morbid rivalry with success and mirth, My God, what hidden strings there are in sex! The things that smell sweet are often tasteless, The things stinking give good taste though chaste less! There is a great ray of hope nevertheless, That failure is sweeter of things hopeless. Why dark, stinking, hairy part alluring? If proven otherwise will quit scribing. Dr. Ram Mehta This is not auto-biographical but about a person I know intimately ============================== 4/22/2011 Form: Sonnet (Pentameter) Third Place win Contest: I am bored with___ sponsored by the Sweetheart of PS

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Date: 5/24/2011 1:53:00 AM
As we say in Australia sex-bex-n-fourex Interesting working of the words Great win Dr Ram on ya mate Don
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Date: 5/23/2011 8:51:00 PM
Congratulations with this win, Dr. Ram. Dont' think I had seen this one yet!!
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Date: 5/16/2011 11:01:00 AM
Congratulations Dr.Ram on your win in Linda-Marie's contest. Love,Carol
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Date: 5/14/2011 8:35:00 AM
Good one, Dr. Ram. :) Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/14/2011 6:27:00 AM
I won't say much since you said it's a person you know.Congrats on your big win in the contest!
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Date: 5/13/2011 5:40:00 PM
My goodness that person needs a good "shrink" Human is what we are, there are no bad parts, no good parts, we are all just human and love is only love if we love ALL of someone? Congrad's on your win [geeez stinky & hairy YIKE!] Light & Love
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Date: 5/13/2011 11:19:00 AM
Good idea for a work..Congratulations..Sara
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Date: 5/13/2011 9:03:00 AM
Congratulations :o)
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Date: 5/13/2011 2:21:00 AM
Many Congrats Dr Ram on 3rd spot in the winners list in Linda's contest with this beautiful depiction of emotions in verse. Luv & best wishes - Hitendra Mehta
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Date: 5/13/2011 12:26:00 AM
Good and Bold. Congrats.
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:57:00 PM
It sounds to me like you're just bored with your partner. Meanwhile remember who made the body...all of it...you'll have time to complain to him before you know it!
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:01:00 PM
Great to see your success Dr Ram with this worthy poem third place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/12/2011 2:23:00 PM
Very good touch of comedy My good Dr Ram the strangest thing us dingalings want women again an again bye mate Don
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Date: 5/12/2011 12:14:00 PM
I've often wondered where gynaecologists stand sexually... Many congrats on both your latest wins, Dr Ram : )
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Date: 5/12/2011 9:19:00 AM
There's too much focus on the act of sex and too little on the feelings behind it, Dr. Ram. Excellent poem! Congratulations on your win, Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/12/2011 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations, Dr. Ram, on your success in Linda's contest!!
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Date: 5/12/2011 5:18:00 AM
Brilliantly worded Dr. Ram. Your choice of words are perfect! Congratulations. Brenda
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Date: 5/12/2011 4:59:00 AM
You touched a very bold theme here, but handled scrupulously...Congrats Dr Ram on your win..regards, gautami
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Date: 5/11/2011 9:31:00 PM
This is quite an emotional write. Many congrats for this win Dr. Ram
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Date: 5/11/2011 7:30:00 PM
Congrats on a well deserved win, Dr Ram. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 5/11/2011 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your success in my contest ..with this stunning entry so full of truth... thankxx for constant support luv..
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Date: 4/24/2011 4:22:00 AM
Dark, stinking, Hairy Part! HA! Yes! I do feel for your friend! Please enjoy your Easter Sunday! I have made an egg poem for you and my Soup friends! Please enjoy! ~JSLambert
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Date: 4/22/2011 4:11:00 PM
The worst I ever had was wonderful!
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:47:00 AM
So innate yet so innane! You so deftly qualify and quantify this prurient deed. It is a need for which we all bleed. Enjoyed your rhyme scheme!
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Date: 4/22/2011 10:30:00 AM
Oi! Enjoyed.. have a nice one..p.d.
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